Two Items — Poem analysis

Carl SandburgEftertänksam

Strong rocks hold up the riksdag bridge . . . always strong river waters shoving their shoulders against them . . . In the riksdag to-night three hundred men are talking to each other about more potatoes and bread for the Swedish people to eat this winter. In a boat among calm waters next to the running waters a fisherman sits in the dark and I, leaning at a parapet, see him lift a net and let it down ... he waits ... the waters run ... the riksdag talks ... he lifts the net and lets it down . . . Stars lost in the sky ten days of drizzle spread over the sky saying yes-yes.

Every afternoon at four o'clock fifteen apple women who have sold their apples in Christiania meet at a coffee house and gab. Every morning at nine o'clock a girl wipes the windows of a hotel across the street from the postoffice in Stockholm. I have pledged them when I go to California next summer and see the orange groves splattered with yellow balls I shall remember other people half way round the world.

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Carl Sandburg, the American poet and journalist born to Swedish immigrant parents, published “Two Items” in his 1918 collection Cornhuskers, at a moment when war and food shortages dominated European headlines. His Swedish heritage and newspaperman’s ear shape the poem’s transatlantic view. What looks at first like two separate sketches becomes a meditation on attention, distance, and the quiet discipline of remembering ordinary lives.

The first sketch opens in Stockholm, where “Strong rocks hold up the riksdag bridge . . . always / strong river waters shoving their shoulders against / them . . .” The repeated “strong” and the hard consonants give the line physical weight, while the ellipses create pauses like the lapping of water. The image is not monumental architecture but an ongoing push-and-hold between rock and river. Inside the riksdag, three hundred men are talking about “more potatoes and bread for the Swedish people to eat this winter.” The language is deliberately plain, almost reportorial; parliamentary power is reduced to the basic question of food. Nearby, a fisherman in a boat lifts and lowers a net in the dark. “He lifts the net and lets it / down” repeats, becoming a refrain of patience set against the politicians’ talk. The sky joins the quiet: “Stars lost in the sky ten days of drizzle spread over / the sky saying yes-yes.” The “yes-yes” is an open-ended murmur, neither approval nor answer, just the sound of weather and time continuing.

The second item shifts to small human routines: fifteen apple women in Christiania (now Oslo) who meet at a coffee house to “gab,” and a girl wiping hotel windows in Stockholm every morning. These figures are not romanticized; the words “gab” and “wipes” are deliberately ordinary. Sandburg gives them the same syntactic weight as the riksdag and the river. The speaker then makes a personal vow: “I have pledged them when I go to California next / summer and see the orange groves splattered with / yellow balls / I shall remember other people half way round the / world.” The verb “splattered” is crucial. It is messy, bright, and a little excessive, as if California’s abundance might overwhelm the memory of northern drizzle and dark waters. But the pledge insists that memory is an act of will: seeing oranges should bring back apple sellers and window washers, not erase them.

The poem’s construction is free verse, without rhyme or regular meter, and it moves like conversation or a newspaper column. Yet repeated structures hold the two “items” together: strong waters and strong rocks, the lifted net and the wiped window, parliamentary talk and coffee-house gab. The rhythm comes from these parallels and from Sandburg’s line breaks, which often isolate small phrases and force the reader to pause. That pause is central to the poem’s significance. Sandburg does not preach about global solidarity; he simply notices that lives on opposite sides of the planet run on parallel rhythms—waiting, working, talking, eating. In an era before instant global communication, he treats distance as something the imagination can cross through small details: a lifted net, a smeared window, a ripe orange grove. The poem’s quiet force lies in that refusal to let abundance become amnesia.

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