Valentine — Poem analysis

Elinor WylieSoñador

Too high, too high to pluck My heart shall swing. A fruit no bee shall suck, No wasp shall sting.

If on some night of cold It falls to ground In apple-leaves of gold I'll wrap it round.

And I shall seal it up With spice and salt, In a carven silver cup, In a deep vault.

Before my eyes are blind And my lips mute, I must eat core and rind Of that same fruit.

Before my heart is dust At the end of all, Eat it I must, I must Were it bitter gall.

But I shall keep it sweet By some strange art; Wild honey I shall eat When I eat my heart.

O honey cool and chaste As clover's breath! Sweet Heaven I shall taste Before my death.

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Elinor Wylie came to prominence in the early 1920s, a moment when many poets were discarding rhyme and meter for experimental free verse. Born in 1885, she found fame with her first collections and died young, leaving a small but distinctive body of verse. Wylie wrote compact, polished lyrics that owed something to the metaphysical poets and something to fairy tale, and her much-publicized personal life gives many of those lyrics an undercurrent of emotional risk. Wylie’s polished surface is part of her meaning; form is a kind of control against disorder. “Valentine” is no exception. Superficially a love poem, it never addresses a beloved. Instead, the speaker turns to her own heart as a piece of fruit hanging too high to pluck.

The central metaphor is startling and precise. The heart is an apple in a tree, safe from the bee that would “suck” and the wasp that would “sting.” The fruit is Edenic and autumnal at once, suggesting temptation, knowledge, and mortality. That height means protection, but also isolation: nothing can spoil the heart, yet nothing can share it. If the cold brings it down, the speaker will wrap it in “apple-leaves of gold” and seal it with spice and salt inside a “carven silver cup” in a “deep vault.” The language grows ceremonial and funereal; salt, silver, and vault imply embalming, treasure, and entombment. To preserve the heart is to protect it, but also to postpone the essential encounter. The poem turns on a fierce necessity: before her eyes are “blind” and her lips “mute,” before her heart becomes “dust,” she must eat “core and rind” of that same fruit. It must be consumed even if it were “bitter gall.” The heart cannot stay locked away like a relic; it has to be tasted, absorbed, and made part of the self before death arrives. This is not self-destruction but self-completion.

The poem’s structure reinforces that ritual urgency. Each stanza is a tight quatrain, alternating six-syllable and four-syllable lines, with clean ABAB rhyme—"pluck" with "suck," "swing" with "sting." The full rhymes and short stanzas recall ballad and hymn, making the poem feel both intimate and inevitable. The rocking, seesaw rhythm mimics the heart’s “swing,” while the repeated “Too high, too high” and later “I must, I must” sound like an incantation. Wylie’s images move from cold night to golden leaves, from spice and salt to wild honey and clover’s breath. The honey is “cool and chaste,” not sugary passion but a clean, almost religious sweetness. The final stanza turns the bitter fruit sweet: by eating her heart with wild honey, the speaker tastes “Sweet Heaven” before death. As fruit gives way to dust and gall yields to honey, the poem builds a compact allegory of mortality and self-acceptance rather than romance.

What makes the poem significant is its reversal of valentine convention. Instead of handing the heart to another, the speaker keeps it, preserves it, and ultimately feeds on it herself. The act is not selfish; it is presented as an unavoidable spiritual necessity. For a woman poet of the 1920s, this self-possession carries an additional charge, quietly refusing the expectation that a woman’s heart must be offered away. Its sweetness is not a gift from elsewhere but something made through “some strange art.” The valentine becomes a memento mori, a reminder that love of self is inseparable from awareness of death. In an age of fragmentation, Wylie’s formal containment makes the emotional stakes feel sharper. The result is a small, polished ceremony of inward devotion—a valentine sent not outward, but to the one heart the speaker is finally unable to refuse.

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