Roads — Poem analysis

Hazel HallContemplatif

One road leads out to the country-side; One road goes by on its way to town; And always, as long as the sun is guide, The feet that love them go up and down.

After the evening star's white light Has lured from the hills or the lighted town. There are other feet all through the night. Following dreams up and down.

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Hazel Hall knew what it meant to watch life move past without being able to join it. Born in 1886, she spent much of her short life in Portland, Oregon, after a childhood bout of scarlet fever left her unable to walk. From an upstairs room she could look down on the street, the passersby, and the roads leading away toward the hills or into the city. That narrow physical world became the raw material for a sharp, quiet body of poems. “Roads” condenses her situation into eight lines about movement, longing, and the difference between daytime travel and the journeys of the mind.

The poem names two roads: one toward the countryside, one on its way to town. During the day, as long as “the sun is guide,” the feet that love them go “up and down.” That first stanza is plain and familiar; roads exist for use, for going out and coming back. But the second stanza changes the light. After the evening star’s “white light” has lured people from the hills or the lighted town, “other feet all through the night” follow dreams “up and down.” At the center is the idea that roads are never truly empty. When the walkers disappear, the roads remain alive with dreamers, memories, or restless minds. The phrase “other feet” is the poem’s quiet shock: these are not ordinary travelers but something more mysterious, moving along the same paths under a different kind of guidance.

The poem is constructed in two balanced quatrains, and its short lines have a walking cadence, as if the rhythm itself steps out and back. The first stanza rhymes “side” with “guide” and “town” with “down”; the second keeps the “town/down” rhyme while adding “light” and “night.” That repeated “town/down” pair creates a loop, returning the reader to the same crossing. The parallel opening, “One road... / One road...,” suggests clear choices, while “other feet” breaks the pattern with a hint of strangeness. Key words work like small landmarks. “Feet” appears in both stanzas, connecting the visible walkers to the unseen ones. “Up and down” closes each stanza like a refrain, turning everyday motion into something nearly ritualistic. The sun may “guide,” but the evening star’s light “lures,” and that verb gives the nighttime a seductive, slightly dangerous pull. “Dreams,” placed at the very end, opens the poem outward: the final journey has no map.

What makes “Roads” significant is its refusal to be simply a poem of confinement. It was written by a poet who could not walk, yet it makes movement—real and imagined—its central concern. Hall watches the roads, but her watching becomes its own form of travel. The poem respects ordinary daytime rhythms while insisting that the world is larger and stranger after dark. In eight lines, a simple view of two roads turns into a meditation on how human longing travels through space, language, and the hours of the night. The “other feet” could belong to anyone: a dreamer, a reader, or Hall herself moving up and down through words because her body could not move along the road.

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