Scandal — Poem analysis

Aren't there bigger things to talk about Than a window in Greenwich Village And hyacinths sprouting Like little puce poems out of a sick soul? Some cosmic hearsay-- As to whom--it can't be Mars! put the moon--that way.... Or what winds do to canyons Under the tall stars... Or even How that old roué, Neptune, Cranes over his bald-head moons At the twinkling heel of a sky-scraper.

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In the Greenwich Village of the 1920s, Lola Ridge knew how easily artists could turn a windowsill into a melodrama. Ridge was an Irish-born poet raised in New Zealand who had settled in New York and thrown herself into its modernist and radical circles. Her free-verse work often caught the energy of immigrant Manhattan, and her politics—anarchist, feminist, fiercely anti-authoritarian—made her suspicious of the way polite society loves a private disgrace. Out of that milieu, "Scandal" poses a question that is also a reproach: why, when the universe is so strange, should anyone be whispering about a window and some hyacinths?

The poem opens with an exasperated "Aren't there bigger things to talk about" before shrinking the subject to "a window in Greenwich Village / And hyacinths sprouting / Like little puce poems out of a sick soul." These lines compress a whole social world into a few objects. A window is a frame, but here it feels small, domestic, almost claustrophobic. The hyacinths, usually symbols of spring and rebirth, turn "puce"—a bruised, sickly purple-brown—and become "poems out of a sick soul." The scandal is not merely an event; it is a way of seeing, one that thrums with unhealthy fascination. Ridge does not explain what happened in that window. That is exactly the point: the details do not matter, because the appetite for them is the real sickness.

Against that narrow frame, the poem offers what it calls "cosmic hearsay." The phrase itself is mischievous, taking the language of gossip and stretching it to the stars. The speaker wonders, with dashes and ellipses that feel like hurried, eager thought, "As to whom—it can't be Mars! put the moon—that way...." The voice is alive, colloquial, almost amused. Then it turns to "what winds do to canyons / Under the tall stars" and finally to Neptune, that "old roué," who "Cranes over his bald-head moons / At the twinkling heel of a sky-scraper." The solar system becomes a cast of characters: a flirtatious planet, moons like a balding head, a skyscraper with a lit, twinkling heel. It is not a retreat into pretty nature; it is an invitation to see the city itself as part of a larger myth.

The construction reinforces this widening of attention. The poem is one long, breathless sentence, a question that keeps adding alternatives rather than demanding an answer. Ridge works in free verse, with no fixed meter or rhyme, but her line breaks and sound echoes do the rhythmic work. "Puce poems" and "sick soul" press s and p sounds together, making the opening feel sticky and feverish. Later, "canyons" and "tall stars" open the vowels outward, and the final image slows into the long, gliding syllables of "sky-scraper." The enjambment from "Aren't there bigger things to talk about / Than a window..." leaves the reader briefly hanging on "talk about" before dropping into the disappointing object of all that talk. The dash after "cosmic hearsay" and the ellipses after "that way...." suggest that the alternative list could go on forever, that the real scandal is our lack of curiosity.

What makes "Scandal" significant is how lightly it carries a serious modernist argument. Ridge refuses to moralize about gossip; instead, she makes gossip look absurdly small beside the tall stars. The poem belongs to the free-verse rebellion that reshaped American poetry in the early twentieth century, and it shows a woman poet claiming that rebellion from inside bohemian New York. At the same time, it is not a rejection of the city. Neptune may be an old roué, but he is craning toward a skyscraper. The celestial and the urban meet in one glance. "Scandal" asks its reader to lift that glance from the neighbor's window to the planets—and to find in the cosmos a much better story.

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