Twelve Hokku on a Canadian Theme 10 — Summary

When Loneliness stalked ... Black panther through gold wheat-fields ... You used Love’s arrows.

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

In three quick lines, loneliness turns into something wild and dangerous. The speaker describes it stalking like a black panther through bright gold wheat fields. That image sets up a strong contrast: the dark, quiet predator moving through warm, open farmland. The ellipses make each line feel like a held breath, as if the speaker is watching something approach.

Then the speaker shifts to “You,” someone who responds with love’s arrows. Love becomes a weapon against that creeping loneliness. The tone is spare and a little tense, but also tender—the speaker remembers being saved or defended by another person’s love. There’s a mythic feel, with the panther and arrows, but it stays rooted in a Canadian landscape of wheat. The mood is both fragile and quietly grateful.

Lee también

Más de Louise Morey Bowman

Todos los poemas
RománticoLouise Morey Bowman

A Sketch

I hear him humming as he drives his car, In mellow baritone, an ancient psalm-- Drifting down to his subtle modern brain From his old covenanting ancestors,
ContemplativoLouise Morey Bowman

Life Sequence

(Unready) Close-folded fern ... So stiff; so coldly self-sustained: But summer passes.
AlegreLouise Morey Bowman

Sympathy

That ugly pumpkin-coloured house That I saw from the train-- I have wondered about the minds of the people inside But I wonder in vain.