The speaker tells Minna that her gown resembles sound: its folds and patterns become “dahlia-murmurs,” as if flower colors have softened into a visual hush. That comparison sets a dreamy, intimate mood. He then turns to her heart’s “everlasting journey,” imagining it moving over a sleepy, winding prayer made of regrets. The repetition of that journey makes it feel ongoing and fragile. Her heart, like the dress, is described as a “fragile traveler of sound”—a murmur trying to find the love that first created it. By blending sight and hearing, the speaker makes the poem feel less like a description and more like a half-heard song. He seems tender and a little melancholy, as if he senses something delicate in Minna that is searching for its origin or for reassurance. The whole poem feels hushed, musical, and wistful.
Minna XXII — Summary
The gown you wear is curiously like sound-- Tangles of dahlia-murmurs taking shape In shrinking, mellow sprays. The everlasting journey of your heart Gliding over a sleepy litany That winds through scattered star-flowers of regrets: The everlasting journey of your heart Is like a fragile traveler of sound-- A murmur seeking the love that gave it birth.