On Both Sides — Poem analysis

Bruce RossContemplatif

on both sides of the old wood fence flooded field

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A fence is a simple machine for insisting on difference: this side, that side, mine, yours. Bruce Ross’s haiku «On Both Sides» undoes that logic in eleven quiet syllables. The entire poem is a single compressed image—"on both sides / of the old wood fence / flooded field"—with no verb, no punctuation, and no capital letter to announce a beginning. It reads less as a sentence than as a visual field, and the boundary at its centre is already half absorbed by water.

The opening words "on both sides" leave the reader waiting. Sides of what? The line break delays the answer, so the idea of division arrives before the thing divided. When "of the old wood fence" appears, the poem seems to have chosen its subject: a wooden boundary, old enough to have become part of the landscape. A fence exists to separate one side from another, to mark ownership or difference. Yet the final line, "flooded field," quietly cancels that work. Not two fields, not two properties, but one field—and it is flooded. The water lies on both sides, making the fence a line drawn through the same continuous surface. The plural "sides" and the singular "field" pull against each other; the fence still names two, while the water shows only one.

Grammatically, the poem refuses movement. There is no verb to say that the water rose or that the fence survived; the participle "flooded" treats the condition as already complete. What we see is aftermath, still and wide. That stillness matters. A flood is usually an event of force, but here it has become a condition, as calm as the old wood standing in it. The lack of punctuation lets "flooded field" hover between being the thing seen and the condition that has swallowed the whole scene. The word "old" also carries a quiet irony: the fence has lasted, yet the flood has made its age irrelevant. A boundary can endure for years and still be overrun by a single season of water.

The poem’s sound is equally economical. The repeated o-sounds in "on both sides of the old wood" open the mouth in a low, unhurried way, while the alliteration of f in "flooded field" ties the final line together and reaches back to "fence." The human-made thing and the natural land are bound by sound even as the image shows them joined by water. The line "of the old wood fence" is entirely monosyllabic, giving it a plain, weathered rhythm, as if each word were a fence post. There is no rhyme to close the poem; the lines simply stop, the way the floodwater stops at no visible edge. The three lines are short, especially the last, whose two words land with a soft downward beat: "flooded field." That final noun, "field," is the only solid ground in the poem, yet it is a ground already under water.

What makes the haiku significant is its restraint. It does not announce that boundaries are illusions or that nature defeats human constructions. It simply places an old fence in a flooded field and lets the image carry the idea. The central image is ordinary, almost overlooked, which is precisely its power: haiku often finds depth in what a casual glance would pass by. Because the poem avoids commentary, the reader experiences the discovery rather than being told what to feel. The fence still stands—its two sides still named—but the water has already shown that the sides are one. In eleven syllables, Ross turns a familiar rural sight into a small meditation on division, time, and the way water refuses to respect the lines we draw.

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