Missed
morning mist
the line married to the ship married to rust
Erasure haiku derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, Saturday 20 July 1667.
Dave Bonta
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morning mist
the line married to the ship married to rust
Erasure haiku derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, Saturday 20 July 1667.
Dave Bonta's "Missed" is only a few words long, but it paints a whole scene. Two lines set the stage: first the soft, blurry "morning mist," then a chain of things joined together: the line, the ship, the rust.
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