Пераклад песні “Аксамітны летні вечар”, (В. Навіцкі і С. Сокалаў-Воюш) — Essay

Dzianis Lobka21.08.2024Inspired

Velvet cosy summer Evening covered all the Earth, Deep and smoky lakes are calling to my native berth Nightingale is singing to me while the world is quiet Belarus - my fate and I am so inspired

And the forest, and the world are covered by his wing Crescent like a golden boat and he’s the Evening King And White Tower like a maiden, freshness of the stream I belong to you and only, Belarus my dream!

Where the breeze is gently swaying green and golden grass, Where the stones and heavy roads that you, man, can surpass. Sunrise paints the sky in red, and echo in the grove But your heart is crying badly, Belarus my love.

I don't need the other places, don’t you even try I don't want another faces, doesn’t matter why, Don’t belong to other culture, it stings like a snake, Cause my Belarus is calling for the heaven’s sake.

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I first read this poem on a screen, in my room, with the hum of central air drowning out any real summer evening. The words felt distant, like a postcard from a country I couldn’t find on a map. “Belarus my dream,” “Belarus my love”—it seemed like a declaration meant for someone else, a kind of patriotism that was all capital letters and exclamation points. I understood the words, but I didn’t understand the feeling. It was just an assignment.

What changed was the line about culture stinging “like a snake.” That jolted me. It wasn’t a gentle sentiment; it was defensive, almost violent in its rejection of anything “other.” I’d read plenty of poems about loving a homeland, but they were usually about missing it from afar, a sweet nostalgia. This was different. This was a love that defined itself by what it was not. The speaker doesn’t just prefer Belarus; they feel actively wounded by the idea of belonging anywhere else. I started to wonder what kind of love is so fierce it has to build walls.

Then I looked at the date: 21.08.2024. This wasn’t a relic. It was written now, in a world of global culture, endless digital connection, and, for Belarus, profound political tension. Suddenly, the poem wasn’t just a gentle landscape painting. The “heavy roads” you can surpass, the heart that is “crying badly”—these weren’t just pretty images. They felt weighted. This love wasn’t passive admiration; it was an act of holding on, a conscious choice in the face of other choices. The “Velvet cosy summer Evening” became less a description and more a sanctuary, a temporary, fragile peace the speaker clings to.

I don’t have a Belarus. I have a suburb. My “native berth” is a driveway. But reading this made me think of my grandfather, who gets a certain quiet look when he talks about the maple tree in his childhood yard, a tree cut down fifty years ago. His voice doesn’t get loud or poetic, but it gets specific. That’s what this poem has: a painful specificity. It’s not just any nightingale; it’s the one singing “while the world is quiet.” It’s not just a tower; it’s the “White Tower like a maiden.” This love is built from tangible, sensory things—the feel of grass, the shape of a crescent, the sound of an echo in a grove.

I finally understood the poem when I stopped trying to relate to the country and started to relate to the compression of feeling. The poem is a vault. It’s taking everything vast—a culture, a history, a landscape, a political reality—and compressing it into a few intense, personal images to keep it safe. The speaker is saying, “This is mine, and I am its, and that fact is the core of me.” It matters because it shows that patriotism, in its deepest sense, isn’t a political slogan. It’s a private, almost desperate, act of preservation. It made me ask what, if anything, I would ever feel that strongly about protecting. My screen-lit room felt very quiet, and very empty, in comparison.

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