Bridal Ballad — Poem analysis

The ring is on my hand, And the wreath is on my brow; Satins and jewels grand Are all at my command. And I am happy now.

And my lord he loves me well; But, when first he breathed his vow, I felt my bosom swell-- For the words rang as a knell, And the voice seemed his who fell In the battle down the dell, And who is happy now.

But he spoke to reassure me, And he kissed my pallid brow, While a reverie came o'er me, And to the churchyard bore me, And I sighed to him before me, Thinking him dead D'Elormie, "Oh, I am happy now!"

And thus the words were spoken, And thus the plighted vow, And, though my faith be broken, And, though my heart be broken, Behold the golden keys That proves me happy now!

Would to God I could awaken For I dream I know not how, And my soul is sorely shaken Lest an evil step be taken,-- Lest the dead who is forsaken May not be happy now.

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A wedding day is supposed to be the happiest of a life, and the bride in Poe's ballad insists that it is. Ring, wreath, satins and jewels are all in place, and the first stanza closes on a firm declaration: "And I am happy now." The rest of the poem takes those words apart. By the last stanza the phrase no longer describes the bride at all. It has become an anxious question about the dead man she once loved.

The turning point comes in the second stanza. Her new husband speaks his vow tenderly, yet she hears it as a funeral bell: "the words rang as a knell." His voice seems to belong to someone "who fell / In the battle down the dell." Poe lets the dead lover's voice take over the living husband's, and the bride's mind slips out of the church. In the third stanza a "reverie" carries her "to the churchyard," and she sighs her "Oh, I am happy now!" to the ghost, "Thinking him dead D'Elormie." The wedding has turned into a haunting.

The poem never says why she marries, but the imagery suggests an answer. Wealth keeps crowding in: "satins and jewels grand," things "at my command," and finally "the golden keys." There is bitter irony in that first claim. She commands the dresses and the jewels, but not her own heart. In the fourth stanza she admits, "my faith be broken, / And, though my heart be broken," and offers the keys as evidence that she is happy. The italicised "_proves_" gives her away. Nobody needs to prove a happiness that is real.

The form works on the reader's nerves. The lines are short, with only a few beats each, and they bounce along like a nursery rhyme or a folk ballad. But the rhymes pile up obsessively. In stanza two, "well," "swell," "knell," "fell" and "dell" all share one sound, and the stanza stretches to seven lines to hold them. The sound does what the bride's mind does, circling one thought it cannot escape, and "knell" is itself a bell word, so the rhyme tolls. Stanza three does the same with the "-me" sounds of "reassure me," "o'er me," "bore me" and "before me." Almost every stanza then ends on a rhyme with "now": "brow," "vow," "how." Her happiness is tied to a present moment she cannot trust. The brow is a small image that returns with a change: first the wreath rests on it, then her husband kisses it, and she is now "pallid."

Each time the refrain comes back, its meaning shifts. In the first stanza it is a bride's boast. In the second, "who is happy now" applies to the dead soldier, and the line quietly implies that the speaker is not. In the third it is a whispered cry to a vision. In the fourth it is a defence, protesting too much. In the last it becomes a fear: "Lest the dead who is forsaken / May not be happy now." The poem begins by asking whether she is happy and ends by asking whether the man she betrayed is at peace. The rhymes of "awaken," "shaken," "taken" and "forsaken" have an almost panicked rhythm. The "evil step" she dreads is left unexplained. Judging by the imagery of vows and broken faith, it most likely refers to the marriage itself, but the vagueness lets guilt hang over it. Her wish to "awaken" suggests that the whole day feels like a nightmare she cannot leave.

The poem is significant for how much it does with so little. It has no plot beyond a wedding and a memory, yet it gives us a full psychological portrait of guilt through one repeated phrase. It also shares preoccupations with Poe's better-known work: a lost beloved, a speaker haunted by death, and a refrain that grows more sinister each time it returns, as with "Nevermore" in "The Raven." Here the horror is quiet. The bride wears the ring and the wreath and says the right words, and the poem shows what a smile can hide.

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