In Youth I Have Known One — Poem analysis

Edgar Allan PoeContemplative

How often we forget all time, when lone Admiring Nature's universal throne; Her woods--her wilds--her mountains--the intense Reply of Hers to Our intelligence!

In youth I have known one with whom the Earth In secret communing held--as he with it, In daylight, and in beauty, from his birth: Whose fervid, flickering torch of life was lit From the sun and stars, whence he had drawn forth A passionate light such for his spirit was fit-- And yet that spirit knew--not in the hour Of its own fervor--what had o'er it power.

Perhaps it may be that my mind is wrought To a ferver by the moonbeam that hangs o'er, But I will half believe that wild light fraught With more of sovereignty than ancient lore Hath ever told--or is it of a thought The unembodied essence, and no more That with a quickening spell doth o'er us pass As dew of the night-time, o'er the summer grass?

Doth o'er us pass, when, as th' expanding eye To the loved object--so the tear to the lid Will start, which lately slept in apathy? And yet it need not be--(that object) hid From us in life--but common--which doth lie Each hour before us--but then only bid With a strange sound, as of a harp-string broken T' awake us--'Tis a symbol and a token--

Of what in other worlds shall be--and given In beauty by our God, to those alone Who otherwise would fall from life and Heaven Drawn by their heart's passion, and that tone, That high tone of the spirit which hath striven Though not with Faith--with godliness--whose throne With desperate energy 't hath beaten down; Wearing its own deep feeling as a crown.

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A memory opens the poem: "In youth I have known one with whom the Earth / In secret communing held." The person is never named. He is simply someone so tuned to the natural world that it spoke back to him, "in daylight, and in beauty, from his birth." From this portrait the poem widens into a question. What is that strange jolt we feel before something beautiful, and where does it come from? Its answer is that such moments are "a symbol and a token" of "other worlds," given by God to people whose passion might otherwise pull them away from "life and Heaven." The last lines then complicate this comfort, because the spirit that receives the gift has "beaten down" a throne and put on a crown of its own.

The shape of the poem is more orderly than its mood. An italic four-line epigraph in rhymed couplets sets the scene, and four eight-line stanzas follow, each rhyming ABABABCC. That pattern builds three long, rolling waves of alternating rhyme and then snaps shut with a couplet. The lines themselves are looser. They start from iambic pentameter but stretch and sag, as in "A passionate light such for his spirit was fit," which seems to run out of breath. Some rhymes are strained too. "Apathy" is pulled into rhyme with "eye" and "lie," and "earth," "birth" and "forth" only roughly match. The effect is of a mind reaching for a feeling faster than the form can hold it.

Light and fire carry most of the imagery. The young man's "fervid, flickering torch of life" is lit "from the sun and stars," so his intensity is borrowed fire. He is also oddly blind, since his spirit does not know "what had o'er it power." In the second stanza the speaker slips into the poem himself, and the hedging is telling. Perhaps his mind is "wrought / To a ferver by the moonbeam," but he will only "half believe" the light has "sovereignty." Then he asks whether it might be "the unembodied essence" of thought itself. The cool image of "dew of the night-time, o'er the summer grass" quietly answers the heat of all that fervor. Judging by this slide from "one" to "my mind," the portrait of the young man may be partly a mask for the speaker, though the poem never says so.

The third stanza turns from grand scenery to something small: a tear that "will start, which lately slept in apathy." The beautiful object, we learn, need not be rare. It may be "common," lying "each hour before us," and only occasionally gets "bid / With a strange sound, as of a harp-string broken" to wake us. The syntax enacts the sudden shock. "Doth o'er us pass" is repeated across the stanza break, the parenthesis "(that object)" interrupts the sentence like a stray thought, and the sentence about "other worlds" leaps over the gap between stanzas three and four. The sleeping and waking vocabulary ("slept," "awake") suggests that ordinary life is a kind of drowsiness and beauty is what rouses us.

The most striking pattern is political. The epigraph speaks of "Nature's universal throne." Then the moonlight has "sovereignty," and finally a "throne" is "beaten down" by a spirit "wearing its own deep feeling as a crown." The grammar is ambiguous about whose throne falls, perhaps godliness's own, and that ambiguity is the point. The spirit has striven "Though not with Faith—with godliness," as if it has chosen intensity of feeling over belief and then made that choice into a kind of rule. Is this heaven's gift or a usurper's triumph? The poem lets both readings stand, and the "desperate energy" suggests the cost.

Readers who know Poe from "The Raven" or "The Fall of the House of Usher" may be surprised by how quiet and searching this is. There is no corpse, no storm, only moonlight, grass and a tear. Yet the same preoccupation is there: the idea that the strongest feelings are dangerous and holy at once. The poem is significant for how honestly it stays uncertain. It does not tell us whether passion leads toward Heaven or away from it, and it ends on an image of a crowned figure who may be either saved or lost.

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