Tall Nettles — Poem analysis

Edward ThomasContemplative

TALL nettles cover up, as they have done These many springs, the rusty harrow, the plough Long worn out, and the roller made of stone: Only the elm butt tops the nettles now.

This corner of the farmyard I like most: As well as any bloom upon a flower I like the dust on the nettles, never lost Except to prove the sweetness of a shower.

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Nobody plants nettles, and nobody thanks them for coming. In Edward Thomas's eight lines they take over a corner of a farmyard and swallow the tools that once made the farm work: a rusty harrow, a plough "long worn out", a stone roller. Only an "elm butt" still shows above the green. This could be a scene of decay, but it is handled with remarkable calm, and by the end the speaker has announced that this untidy corner is the part of the farmyard he likes best.

The first stanza is a single sentence, a kind of inventory, and its grammar does quiet work. "As they have done / These many springs" tells us this is no sudden collapse. It is a slow, repeated process, measured in seasons rather than disasters. The nettles are not invading; they are doing what they do every year. The objects are listed flatly, joined by commas and "and", as though the speaker is simply looking and not lamenting. Yet the sounds are tactile. "Rusty harrow" rasps with its r's, and in "Long worn out" and "elm butt tops" stressed monosyllables pile up so the lines thud like heavy, disused iron and timber. The underlying rhythm is the ten-syllable iambic line, but Thomas lets it stumble. The first line opens on the stress of "Tall", and the second stretches to eleven syllables. Nothing sounds polished, which suits a place where nothing has been tidied.

Then, with the colon at the end of line three, the poem turns toward the only thing still standing. "Only the elm butt tops the nettles now" is the last word on the scene, and "now" quietly sets the present against all those earlier springs. The nettles have not just covered the machinery; they have outgrown it.

The second stanza brings in the first and only "I". "This corner of the farmyard I like most" is deliberately modest. The verb is "like", not "love" or "admire", and the inverted word order delays the claim just long enough to give it a stubborn charm. What he likes is not a view or a flower but "the dust on the nettles". The comparison with "any bloom upon a flower" is more interesting than it first appears. "Bloom" means a blossom, but it also names the soft, powdery film on a plum or a grape. Dust, the thing a housekeeper sweeps away, is promoted to a kind of natural finish, and a stinging weed becomes the thing that wears it.

The last two lines hold the poem's one paradox. Dust is "never lost / Except to prove the sweetness of a shower." The line break after "lost" briefly makes dust sound like something precious, and then the sentence reveals that the only thing that removes it is rain. Rain and dust need each other. Anyone who has smelled a shower falling on dry ground will recognise that "sweetness", and the poem suggests we would not notice it without the dust to be washed away. Even the dirt has a job to do.

The rhymes are ABAB, and they are plain, but they are not all perfect. "Done" and "stone" look like a rhyme on the page but do not quite chime in the ear, and to a modern ear "most" and "lost" do not either. The second rhymes, "plough" and "now", then "flower" and "shower", are full and open. The poem ends on that clean, soft sound, as though the rain has arrived. The word "nettles" appears three times, as the subject, as the thing the elm butt rises above, and as the bearer of dust. This keeps the humblest plant in the yard at the centre of the poem.

What makes the poem significant is how much it declines to say. The tools are useless, the nettles are weeds and the dust is dirt, and the poem finds each worth looking at without stating a moral. Its only claim is "I like", and that restraint is persuasive. Thomas is often read as a poet of ordinary English countryside, and in these eight lines he asks for attention to things the farm has stopped valuing. Their worth lies in how they look and in how they take part in the weather.

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