The Trumpet — Poem analysis

RISE up, rise up, And, as the trumpet blowing Chases the dreams of men, As the dawn glowing The stars that left unlit The land and water, Rise up and scatter The dew that covers The print of last night's lovers-- Scatter it, scatter it!

While you are listening To the clear horn, Forget, men, everything On this earth newborn, Except that it is lovelier Than any mysteries. Open your eyes to the air That has washed the eyes of the stars Through all the dewy night: Up with the light, To the old wars; Arise, arise!

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Dawn arrives in "The Trumpet" as an order rather than a scene. Edward Thomas gives the poem to a single voice that does almost nothing but command: "Rise up," "Scatter," "Forget," "Open your eyes," "Arise." A bugle, a sunrise and a summons to fight blur into one waking call.

The first stanza is a single sentence that takes its time. Before the main command arrives ("Rise up and scatter," line 7), we get two comparisons: the trumpet that "chases the dreams of men" and the dawn "glowing" away "the stars that left unlit / The land and water." The grammar is compressed, and you may need to read it twice, but the picture is clear. Morning drives out dreams and the weak light of the stars together. The sentence then lands on the oddest and most tender image in the poem: dew that "covers / The print of last night's lovers." A night of private happiness has left footprints in the grass. The speaker tells the men to "scatter" the dew, and the poem leaves open whether that wipes the traces out or uncovers them. Either way, the intimate, sleepy world of night has to be broken for the day to begin.

The sound is built to match the trumpet. Lines are short, usually two or three beats, and the rhymes turn up at irregular intervals, never settling into a tune: "blowing" and "glowing," "water" and "scatter," then "covers" and "lovers," which stitches the dew to the lovers it hides. The stanza ends on "Scatter it, scatter it!", a repeated phrase that sounds like a bugle sounding the same notes twice.

In the second stanza the commands turn stranger. "Forget, men, everything," the speaker says, and then allows one exception: that the "earth newborn" is "lovelier / Than any mysteries." This echoes the first stanza's chasing away of dreams. The speaker prefers the visible, morning world to anything hidden or imagined. The instruction that follows is about seeing. Men are to open their eyes "to the air / That has washed the eyes of the stars / Through all the dewy night." Here the stars are personified as having eyes, and the night air as something that cleans them. The men are offered the same clean sight, as if waking were a kind of washing.

Then comes the turn: "Up with the light, / To the old wars." Everything before this has been about newness, with a "newborn" earth and a freshly lit sky, so the word "old" lands heavily. The morning is new, but the wars are ancient and recurring. No enemy is named, no flag is mentioned, and there is no promise of glory. The only reason the poem gives for rising is that the world is lovely. That is an inference from the text, but it is hard to avoid. The call to fight rests on beauty rather than on patriotism or hatred. Thomas was killed in the First World War, and that knowledge colours the final lines for a modern reader. The poem itself, though, says only "the old wars" and leaves the rest unspecified.

The sounds work quietly here too. "Stars" in line 8 and "wars" in line 11 echo each other across three lines, and the rhyme links the delicate, washed stars to the violence the men are being sent toward. Just before that, "night" and "light" close the stanza's middle with a clean chime. The last line, "Arise, arise!", reverses the opening "Rise up, rise up" and frames the poem as a loop. The day begins and ends with the same command.

The poem is significant because it uses a stirring, fanfare-like form to do something less simple than rouse. It gives the men, and the reader, a brilliant morning, tells them to see it clearly, and then points them toward the wars. The poem never says whether this is a gift or a trap. That double edge lets a short, urgent piece keep asking what the sleepers are being woken for.

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