Swedes — Poem analysis

THEY have taken the gable from the roof of clay On the long swede pile. They have let in the sun To the white and gold and purple of curled fronds Unsunned. It is a sight more tender-gorgeous At the wood-corner where Winter moans and drips Than when, in the Valley of the Tombs of Kings, A boy crawls down into a Pharaoh's tomb And, first of Christian men, beholds the mummy, God and monkey, chariot and throne and vase, Blue pottery, alabaster, and gold.

But dreamless long-dead Amen-hotep lies. This is a dream of Winter, sweet as Spring.

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Edward Thomas's "Swedes" sets a heap of stored root vegetables against the treasure chamber of an Egyptian king, and lets the vegetables win. The claim is outrageous, and the poem makes it with a straight face.

The scene is simple. Some unnamed "they" have "taken the gable from the roof of clay / On the long swede pile." Judging by the language, this is a mound of swedes stored for winter under a shaped covering of earth, and opening one end has "let in the sun" on what grew inside. What the light finds is "the white and gold and purple of curled fronds / Unsunned." That last word is left alone at the start of a line and cut off by a full stop, as if the poem itself has stepped from darkness into daylight. The colours are pale and bright at once, because they have never been touched by the sun until now.

Thomas's name for the sight, "tender-gorgeous," is the key phrase. The compound fuses two words that rarely sit together. "Tender" suggests something small and breakable, while "gorgeous" suggests royal richness. The swede pile is both. It sits "at the wood-corner where Winter moans and drips," and the personified winter, with its sad, wet sounds, makes the glowing colours look warmer by contrast.

The comparison then takes over most of the poem. Five lines hold a single sentence in which "a boy crawls down into a Pharaoh's tomb / And, first of Christian men, beholds the mummy." The poem never says who the boy is, but the phrase "first of Christian men" gives the moment a hushed, almost ceremonial weight. Then comes the inventory: "God and monkey, chariot and throne and vase, / Blue pottery, alabaster, and gold." The repeated "and"s make the objects seem to pile up as the eye adjusts to the dark. "God and monkey" is a small jolt, with the sacred and the comic side by side. The word "gold" closes the list just as it sat in the middle of the swedes' "white and gold and purple," so the two treasures are linked by sound and colour.

After ten lines of build-up, two short sentences deliver the verdict. "But dreamless long-dead Amen-hotep lies." The stacked adjectives, and the long, awkward, hyphenated name, make the line lie as heavily as the king does. All that gold belongs to a dead man who can no longer dream. The swedes are alive. Their pale shoots are doing what living things do in the dark, which is reaching toward spring. So the last line can say: "This is a dream of Winter, sweet as Spring." The word "dream" turns the earlier "dreamless" around. The line is also a paradox, since winter is dreaming of spring and the result tastes of it.

The central idea, then, is that living, growing beauty is worth more than preserved glory, and that wonder depends on being willing to look. The poem also hints that the swede-opener and the tomb-crawler are doing the same thing. Both let light into a closed place and are amazed. The difference is that one place holds a corpse and the other holds a crop.

The form keeps the poem modest. It is unrhymed, in loose blank verse built on the ten-syllable line, and its sentences run over the line-ends ("let in the sun / To the white and gold…") the way ordinary speech does. Nothing sings or shows off. Even the final pair of lines, which might have been a rhyming couplet, ends on "lies" and "Spring," which don't rhyme. The poem stays plain just as it makes its boldest claim, and that plainness is part of why the claim is convincing.

Thomas is remembered for quiet poems about the English countryside, and "Swedes" is a good example of what that quietness can do. It is only twelve lines long, but it asks a real question about what we call treasure. A reader who leaves it looking differently at a muddy heap of vegetables, or at any ordinary thing with the cover taken off, has understood it.

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