Liberty — Poem analysis

Edward ThomasContemplative

THE last light has gone out of the world, except This moonlight lying on the grass like frost Beyond the brink of the tall elm's shadow It is as if everything else had slept Many an age, unforgotten and lost The men that were, the things done, long ago, All I have thought; and but the moon and I Live yet and here stand idle over the grave Where all is buried. Both have liberty To dream what we could do if we were free To do some thing we had desired long, The moon and I. There's none less free than who Does nothing and has nothing else to do, Being free only for what is not to his mind, And nothing is to his mind. If every hour Like this one passing that I have spent among The wiser others when I have forgot To wonder whether I was free or not, Were piled before me, and not lost behind, And I could take and carry them away I should be rich; or if I had the power To wipe out every one and not again Regret, I should be rich to be so poor. And yet I still am half in love with pain, With what is imperfect, with both tears and mirth, With things that have an end, with life and earth, And this moon that leaves me dark within the door.

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Freedom is usually something to cheer for, but Edward Thomas's "Liberty" stands in a moonlit field and asks what it is worth when you have nothing to spend it on. The speaker is alone at night, and the poem's grand opening, "The last light has gone out of the world", is corrected almost at once by "except / This moonlight". Even the gloom is hedged. The moonlight is "lying on the grass like frost", a simile that makes it cold, still and slightly dead, and the elm's shadow has a "brink", as if the dark were a drop. The speaker imagines everything else asleep for ages, "unforgotten and lost", a phrase that holds two opposite ideas at once. Only he and the moon "stand idle over the grave / Where all is buried."

That word "idle" is the poem's hinge. The moon and the speaker both "have liberty / To dream what we could do if we were free", and the stumbling repetition of "liberty", "free", "free" shows how hollow the word has become. Then comes the argument: "There's none less free than who / Does nothing and has nothing else to do." Liberty needs something to be free for. The man in this sentence is "free only for what is not to his mind, / And nothing is to his mind". The repeated "mind" folds the line back on itself until nothing is left.

The second half turns to money. The speaker imagines every hour he spent among "the wiser others" piled up in front of him, "and not lost behind". Time becomes a hoard, and he would "be rich" if he could carry it away. The hours he pictures are the ones when he "forgot / To wonder whether I was free or not", which suggests that freedom is felt most when nobody is checking for it. His other fantasy is the reverse, to wipe out every hour and never regret it, so that he would be "rich to be so poor". Neither wish can come true, and the paradox shows how tangled his feelings about the past are.

The last five lines change direction with "And yet". The speaker admits he is "half in love with pain, / With what is imperfect, with both tears and mirth, / With things that have an end". The repeated "with" turns the ending into a slow list of loves, and "half" keeps it honest. He is not celebrating suffering, only admitting that he is attached to a life that ends. The moon's liberty belongs to something distant and endless, which is exactly what he cannot be. The final line, "this moon that leaves me dark within the door", is ambiguous. The moon may light the field and leave the doorway black, or leave the speaker dark inside, and the poem does not choose. Judging by the setting, he is on the threshold of going in, still caught between the cold outdoors and the warmth of a human life.

The form fits this wavering. The poem runs as one unbroken block, mostly in loose iambic pentameter, with sentences that spill over line endings like a thought arriving in pieces. The rhymes keep surfacing and disappearing. The opening lines pair up at a distance, with "frost" answered by "lost" and "shadow" by "ago", while "except" and "slept" chime more faintly. Later there are brief couplets, "liberty / free", "who / do", "forgot / not", "mirth / earth", which appear and dissolve before they settle into a pattern. The last word, "door", finally answers "poor" from four lines earlier, so the ending sounds closed and unresolved at once.

The poem matters because it will not accept the easy meaning of its title. It turns liberty over and finds that unlimited freedom, with no task or attachment to give it direction, feels like emptiness. What the speaker wants is a life with limits, one that costs him something. Few poems reach that conclusion so quietly, without raising their voice.

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