The Gallows — Poem analysis

Edward ThomasContemplative

THERE was a weasel lived in the sun With all his family, Till a keeper shot him with his gun And hung him up on a tree, Where he swings in the wind and rain, In the sun and in the snow, Without pleasure, without pain, On the dead oak tree bough.

There was a crow who was no sleeper, But a thief and a murderer Till a very late hour; and this keeper Made him one of the things that were, To hang and flap in rain and wind, In the sun and in the snow. There are no more sins to be sinned On the dead oak tree bough.

There was a magpie, too, Had a long tongue and a long tail; He could both talk and do-- But what did that avail? He, too, flaps in the wind and rain Alongside weasel and crow, Without pleasure, without pain, On the dead oak tree bough.

And many other beasts And birds, skin, bone and feather, Have been taken from their feasts And hung up there together, To swing and have endless leisure In the sun and in the snow, Without pain, without pleasure, On the dead oak tree bough.

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Edward Thomas opens "The Gallows" like a nursery rhyme: "There was a weasel lived in the sun / With all his family." The tone is cosy, but by the fourth line a keeper has shot the weasel and hung him on a tree. Gamekeepers did display the bodies of animals they counted as vermin, and the poem follows three of these victims, a weasel, a crow and a magpie, before widening to "many other beasts / And birds, skin, bone and feather." Its central idea is that death cancels everything: appetite, crime, cleverness, even pleasure and pain. The bodies swing "Without pleasure, without pain," and nothing else is left to say about them.

What makes the poem unsettling is how calmly it says this. The keeper appears in the first two stanzas and then vanishes into passive verbs: the beasts "have been taken" and "hung up there." Nobody is blamed or praised. The title suggests a judicial hanging, and the poem plays with that idea by giving each animal a character. The weasel has no charge against him, only a family and the sun. The crow is "a thief and a murderer / Till a very late hour," a phrase of dry, almost comic understatement that treats his death as a closing time. The magpie "could both talk and do," yet the question "But what did that avail?" is abrupt, and the dash before it cuts his talents short. Innocent, guilty and gifted all end up on the same branch.

The language of death is full of ironic comfort. The crow is made "one of the things that were," a gentle phrase that turns a creature into a grammatical past tense. "There are no more sins to be sinned" sounds like relief, as if the hanging were a kind of absolution. In the last stanza the bodies "swing and have endless leisure," and "leisure" is the cruellest word in the poem. It borrows the vocabulary of retirement to describe rotting carcasses. The animals were "taken from their feasts," so their last active state was hunger being satisfied, and the poem leaves us to feel how small and ordinary that was.

The form works the same way. Each of the four stanzas has eight lines, and the lines fall into a loose, lilting beat close to a ballad or children's rhyme. That lilt makes the content stranger, because the verse swings as steadily as the bodies. The rhymes are mostly full and neat: "sleeper" with "keeper," "tail" with "avail," "feasts" with "beasts." In the last stanza "leisure" chimes with "pleasure," which joins the two ideas that death has just made meaningless.

Repetition matters most. Lines such as "In the sun and in the snow" and "On the dead oak tree bough" return stanza after stanza like a tolling bell. The opening line placed the living weasel "in the sun," and the refrain keeps the sun but adds snow, so the seasons turn while nothing changes for the dead. The refrain also contains one small imperfection: "snow" and "bough" are not a true rhyme. I read this as a faint unresolved note, though it is only my inference, and the ending never quite settles. In the final stanza the pairing flips to "Without pain, without pleasure," so that the word order can meet "leisure." Even this tiny reversal feels like the bodies turning on the branch.

The poem is significant because it gets so much from so little. Its vocabulary is plain and its images are few: a tree, a keeper, some feathers and bones. Yet it raises large questions about whether sin and talent mean anything once life stops, and whether human justice has any claim over the natural world. Thomas died in the First World War in 1917, and a reader might hear in this detached stillness a wider sense of mass death. The poem itself never says so, and that connection is only a possibility. What the text does give us is a bleak, quiet vision in which every creature is silenced equally, and the poem's calm leaves the reader to decide how disturbing that should be.

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