Musicians wrestle everywhere — Poem analysis

Emily DickinsonContemplative

Musicians wrestle everywhere -- All day -- among the crowded air I hear the silver strife -- And -- walking -- long before the morn -- Such transport breaks upon the town I think it that "New Life"!

If is not Bird -- it has no nest -- Nor "Band" -- in brass and scarlet -- drest -- Nor Tamborin -- nor Man -- It is not Hymn from pulpit read -- The "Morning Stars" the Treble led On Time's first Afternoon!

Some -- say -- it is "the Spheres" -- at play! Some say that bright Majority Of vanished Dames -- and Men! Some -- think it service in the place Where we -- with late -- celestial face -- Please God -- shall Ascertain!

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Emily Dickinson begins with a paradox: "Musicians wrestle everywhere." Music is usually harmony, yet she gives us a fight, "the silver strife." The oxymoron holds beauty and struggle in a single phrase, as if the sound were a bright contest happening in "the crowded air." The speaker is out walking "long before the morn" when "such transport breaks upon the town" that she calls it "that 'New Life'!" "Transport" means both rapture and being carried off, and the sound seems to do both to her. Nothing in the poem tells us flatly what she hears. It reads like a riddle whose answer is never given.

The second stanza answers by elimination. It is not a bird, since "it has no nest." It is not a "Band" dressed "in brass and scarlet," not a tambourine, not even a "Man." It is not a "Hymn from pulpit read." The list moves from nature to the town band to the church, ruling out the natural, the human and the official one after another. Judging by the dark hour and the mention of nests, a reader might guess at dawn birdsong, but the poem denies even that. The effect is of a speaker who knows her usual words are too small, so she tries them and sets them aside.

When she finally reaches for a grand comparison, she reaches into scripture and myth: "The 'Morning Stars' the Treble led / On Time's first Afternoon!" The quotation marks around "Morning Stars" mark a borrowed phrase, an echo of the Bible's picture of stars singing together at creation. The paradox is that she calls it "first Afternoon," not first morning. Even her cosmic image is slightly off-kilter, as if creation's first music happened a little later in the day than anyone expected. That small twist is typical of Dickinson, who bends familiar religious language rather than simply repeating it.

The last stanza passes the question to other people. "Some -- say -- it is 'the Spheres' -- at play!" refers to the old idea of planets making music as they turn. Others think it is the "bright Majority / Of vanished Dames -- and Men," the dead gathered in a crowd. Others take it for "service in the place / Where we -- with late -- celestial face -- / Please God -- shall Ascertain!" The speaker offers no verdict of her own. She reports what "some" say, and the sentence trails off into the future. We will arrive "late," with heavenly faces, and only then will we know. "Please God" is a hedge that sounds both polite and a little wry, and "Ascertain" is a dry, almost legal word set against all this glory. It makes certainty sound like paperwork that must wait until after death.

The form supports this. Each stanza has six lines and follows a pattern that is roughly aabccb. Pairs such as "everywhere" and "air," or "place" and "face," chime cleanly, while others, such as "morn" and "town" or "Man" and "Afternoon," only half-rhyme, so the sound never settles completely. The lines mostly move in short, hymn-like beats, with the sixth line shrinking to three: "On Time's first Afternoon!" and "Please God -- shall Ascertain!" Each stanza ends on a small exclamation, like a breath of awe. The dashes, which Dickinson uses throughout her poetry, break the lines into gasps, so we feel the speaker hesitating and rushing at once. The odd capitals on words like "Band," "Hymn" and "Majority" make ordinary nouns look like titles or names, a little grander than they should be.

Dickinson lived in Amherst, Massachusetts, and wrote close to eighteen hundred poems, most of them unpublished in her lifetime, but this poem needs no biography to work. Its significance lies in how it handles a feeling that resists explanation. It does not shrink the experience to one tidy meaning, and it does not claim to know more than it does. Wonder, the poem suggests, is honest about the limits of language, and the best the speaker can do is list what the sound is not, repeat what others guess, and wait. The mystery at the center of the poem stays intact, and that is why it keeps working on a reader.

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