There is a flower that Bees prefer — Poem analysis

There is a flower that Bees prefer -- And Butterflies -- desire -- To gain the Purple Democrat The Humming Bird -- aspire --

And Whatsoever Insect pass -- A Honey bear away Proportioned to his several dearth And her -- capacity --

Her face be rounder than the Moon And ruddier than the Gown Or Orchis in the Pasture -- Or Rhododendron -- worn --

She doth not wait for June -- Before the World be Green -- Her sturdy little Countenance Against the Wind -- be seen --

Contending with the Grass -- Near Kinsman to Herself -- For Privilege of Sod and Sun -- Sweet Litigants for Life --

And when the Hills be full -- And newer fashions blow -- Doth not retract a single spice For pang of jealousy --

Her Public -- be the Noon -- Her Providence -- the Sun -- Her Progress -- by the Bee -- proclaimed -- In sovereign -- Swerveless Tune --

The Bravest -- of the Host -- Surrendering -- the last -- Nor even of Defeat -- aware -- What cancelled by the Frost --

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Dickinson never names her flower, but the clues add up: a round, ruddy face, a "Purple Democrat" that bees prefer, a plant that fights the grass for space and appears before June. Judging by those details, clover is the likeliest candidate, though the poem keeps the secret. What matters more is what Dickinson does with the portrait. A flower most people would walk over becomes a small, stubborn heroine, and the poem follows her from the first rush of insects to the killing frost.

The word "Democrat" does a lot of work in the opening stanza. This is a flower open to everyone: "Whatsoever Insect pass" will "bear away" honey, "Proportioned to his several dearth / And her -- capacity." It is a quiet, fair economy in which each visitor takes according to need and she gives according to what she can. Yet by the final stanza the same flower has a "Public," a "Providence," a "Progress" and a "sovereign" tune. Dickinson borrows the language of politics and law to make a plain meadow plant look like a ruler who has earned her throne by being useful. The grass and the flower become "Sweet Litigants for Life," neighbors arguing over "Privilege of Sod and Sun." The phrase "Near Kinsman to Herself" makes the grass her relative, so the lawsuit is a family quarrel. "Sweet" and "Litigants" shouldn't fit together, and that small friction is where the humor lives.

The form is deceptively modest. Most stanzas alternate longer and shorter lines, roughly eight syllables then six, the rhythm of a hymn or ballad. Some rhymes are exact: "desire" and "aspire," "Green" and "seen," "Sun" and "Tune." Others only lean toward each other, as with "Gown" and "worn," "last" and "Frost," and "away" and "capacity." The hymn tune is there, but it never quite settles into comfort. The grammar adds to the odd formality. "Her face be rounder than the Moon" and "Her Public -- be the Noon" use a subjunctive "be" that sounds like a decree being read aloud, and "She doth not wait for June" gives the flower a touch of old-fashioned dignity. The tone is half affectionate teasing, half real respect.

Dickinson's dashes and capital letters also shape the meaning. Capitals turn Bees, Wind, Noon and Sun into characters in a small court drama. The dashes slow the reading until the key moments feel weighed. "Surrendering -- the last --" makes the reader wait through the pauses, just as the flower holds out until the last possible moment. "Swerveless Tune" is one of the poem's best phrases. It describes the bee's steady hum, but it also describes the flower's character, since she does not swerve. Even when "newer fashions blow" and the hills fill with rivals, she "Doth not retract a single spice / For pang of jealousy." Her sweetness does not depend on being admired or on being the newest thing.

The last stanza shifts into the vocabulary of war: "Bravest -- of the Host," "Surrendering," "Defeat." The flower is a soldier who stays at her post after everyone else has gone. Then comes the sharpest turn. She is "Nor even of Defeat -- aware," and the final line, "What cancelled by the Frost," trails off without a finished sentence, as if the poem itself has been cut short. The reader can take this as sad, because the frost wins, or as admirable, because a creature that never knows it has lost has not really been beaten on its own terms. The poem leaves both readings open.

The central idea is that worth lies in steady giving, not in rank, novelty or winning. The poem is also a good example of how Dickinson finds large subjects such as power, rivalry, courage and mortality in something small enough to fit between her fingers. In thirty-two lines she borrows from politics, law and warfare, and the clover-sized heroine at the center still never feels crushed by the comparison.

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