The Butterfly upon the Sky, — Poem analysis

Emily DickinsonContemplative

The Butterfly upon the Sky, That doesn't know its Name And hasn't any tax to pay And hasn't any Home Is just as high as you and I, And higher, I believe, So soar away and never sigh And that's the way to grieve --

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For seven of its eight lines, Dickinson's poem could pass for a light fable about an insect drifting across the sky. Then the last line turns it into advice: "So soar away and never sigh / And that's the way to grieve." The butterfly was never really the subject. It is a model, and the poem asks the reader to learn from it how to carry sorrow.

Look at what the butterfly lacks. It "doesn't know its Name," "hasn't any tax to pay" and "hasn't any Home." Name, tax and home are the things that tie a person into a community: who you are, what you owe, where you belong. By listing them as absences, Dickinson turns them into weights, and the butterfly is high because it carries none of them. There is a quiet joke in the first lines too. The creature "doesn't know its Name," yet the speaker calls it "Butterfly," so the name is a label that humans, not the insect, need. Even the capital letters seem to play along. "Butterfly," "Sky," "Name" and "Home" are capitalised, while the dull bureaucratic "tax" stays in lower case.

The claim at the centre is pleasantly cheeky. The butterfly "Is just as high as you and I, / And higher, I believe." First it is equal to us, then it is better, and the speaker softens the boast with a modest "I believe," as though only half sure. The phrase "you and I" pulls the reader into the scene, so the butterfly is measured against us, and we are told we can match it if we choose.

The form is a quiet hymn-like one. The lines alternate between eight and six syllables, a pattern often called common meter, and the rhythm is mostly iambic, with a light unstressed-then-stressed beat. This is the rhythm of hymns and nursery songs, and it gives the poem a gentle, singsong confidence. I'd suggest the shorter lines, such as "And hasn't any Home," work like a settling after each longer line's lift, a little like a flutter and a drop. The rhymes are more inventive than they first appear. "Sky" in the opening line is answered much later by "I" and "sigh," so the same sound runs through the poem. It is as if the sigh were the sky's sound pulled down to earth, a small, heavy version of the open air. "Believe" and "grieve" rhyme fully and bring the argument to rest, while "Name" and "Home" only half-rhyme, sharing a closing "m," which fits two ideas that belong together. "Pay" is left without a partner altogether.

The repeated "And" in "And hasn't any tax to pay / And hasn't any Home" gives the list a breathless, piling-up feel, as if each lost burden were another bit of ballast being thrown overboard. Then the verbs change. The description of the butterfly gives way to commands, "soar" and "never sigh," and the speaker becomes brisk, almost cheerful.

That brisk tone is what makes the ending interesting. The poem never says what is being grieved, and it never claims that sorrow is small. Its advice can be read two ways. Soaring might mean escaping pain by rising above the ordinary world of names, debts and homes. Or it might mean transforming pain, giving sorrow wings rather than letting it sink into sighs. The poem leaves the choice open, and that openness keeps the final line from sounding like a greeting-card slogan.

Dickinson, who lived in Amherst, Massachusetts, and published very little in her lifetime, was a poet of compression, and this poem shows it. In eight short lines she sets a tiny creature against the whole machinery of identity and duty, gives it the advantage, and turns the comparison into a way of facing loss. She also does it in the plain, familiar rhythm of a hymn, as though the lesson were small enough to hum.

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