To tell the Beauty would decrease — Poem analysis

Emily DickinsonContemplative

To tell the Beauty would decrease To state the Spell demean -- There is a syllable-less Sea Of which it is the sign -- My will endeavors for its word And fails, but entertains A Rapture as of Legacies -- Of introspective Mines --

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Dickinson opens with something close to a law of nature: describe beauty and you shrink it. "To tell the Beauty would decrease / To state the Spell demean" gives two verbs of loss, one about size and one about dignity. The grammar shrinks too. The second line borrows "would" from the first and leaves it out, so the sentence loses a word just as it speaks of loss. The central idea follows from this. The experiences that matter most outrun language, and the attempt to put them into words fails. But the poem insists that the failure is not empty. It leaves the speaker richer.

The word choices are carefully doubled. "State" sounds official, like a flat declaration or a statement for the record, which is exactly the wrong tool for something enchanted. "Spell" means both a magic charm and, in another sense, the act of putting a word together letter by letter. To spell the Spell would be to break it into parts. Then comes the poem's boldest image, a "syllable-less Sea." The syllable is the smallest unit of speech, and the sea has none. It is continuous and undivided, with nothing to chop into pieces. Beauty is only "the sign" of it, a signpost or token rather than the thing itself. There is a small joke here as well: "syllable-less" takes four syllables to say.

In the second stanza a speaker finally appears. The first four lines are impersonal, but now we get "My will endeavors for its word." "Endeavors" is long and effortful, and "fails" lands right after it, short and blunt, like someone stepping off a stair that isn't there. The pivot is the small word "but." The will fails, "but entertains / A Rapture." To entertain is to play host, so failure becomes a kind of doorway, and the speaker receives a guest she could not have invited by finding the right word.

The last two lines turn to money. The rapture is "as of Legacies," the sudden feeling of inheriting wealth you did nothing to earn. It also comes from "introspective Mines." Mines are dug downward and hide their treasure, and "introspective" turns that digging inward. The poem therefore sets two spaces against each other. The Sea is vast, outward and horizontal, while the Mines are deep, inward and vertical. Neither can be fully reported on by someone who has visited it. By the end, the beauty has moved from the world into the self, where it becomes something like private property.

The form supports this quiet movement. The lines alternate between eight and six syllables in a mostly iambic beat, the pattern of a hymn or ballad. That familiar, steady music makes the strange ideas easier to follow and gives the poem a feeling of calm certainty. The rhymes are loose rather than perfect. "Demean" and "sign" end on the same n sound, as do "entertains" and "Mines," and "sign" and "Mines" come close to a true rhyme. A long *ee* sound also drifts through "decrease," "demean," "Sea" and "Legacies," linking the worry of the opening to the wealth of the ending. Dickinson's trademark dashes, one at the end of line 2 and one at the end of line 7, work like held breaths. They let the sentence stop short of what it cannot say. The capitals on Beauty, Spell, Sea, Rapture, Legacies and Mines promote each abstraction almost to the status of a proper name.

What makes the poem significant is that it does what it describes. In eight lines it never tells us what the beauty looks like. There is no landscape, no face, no sunset. Instead it gives us the sign, the sea and the aftermath, and trusts us to feel the size of the thing from the outline of its absence. It is a poem about the limits of poems that manages to be persuasive anyway. It also reverses the usual idea of failure: the speaker's inability to find the word is exactly what keeps the experience whole, so that it stays inside, uncounted and unspent. For a reader, that offers a useful way to think about the moments we say we "can't describe." Dickinson suggests that this inability may be less a gap in our vocabulary than a sign we have found something worth keeping.

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