If I could bribe them by a Rose — Poem analysis

If I could bribe them by a Rose I'd bring them every flower that grows From Amherst to Cashmere! I would not stop for night, or storm -- Or frost, or death, or anyone -- My business were so dear!

If they would linger for a Bird My Tambourin were soonest heard Among the April Woods! Unwearied, all the summer long, Only to break in wilder song When Winter shook the boughs!

What if they hear me! Who shall say That such an importunity May not at last avail?

That, weary of this Beggar's face -- They may not finally say, Yes -- To drive her from the Hall?

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Bribery is usually sly and hidden, but the bribe in Emily Dickinson's poem is a rose, a gift so small and sweet that the whole idea turns comic before it turns anxious. The speaker wants something from "them." She never says who they are or what she wants. Instead she spends nineteen lines imagining how far she would go to get it, and in the end she pins her hopes not on charm or generosity but on sheer nuisance value.

The first stanza inflates a tiny offer until it becomes absurd. One rose grows into "every flower that grows," and the journey stretches "From Amherst to Cashmere!", from the small New England town where Dickinson lived to a name that would have sounded wonderfully distant to a nineteenth-century reader. Then comes the list of obstacles: "night, or storm -- / Or frost, or death, or anyone." Death sits in the middle of the list, and "anyone" deflates it, as if the speaker had run out of dangers and started naming passers-by. The stanza closes on "My business were so dear!", a word choice that plays on the bribe itself. "Business" suggests a transaction, and "dear" means both precious and costly.

In the second stanza the gift changes from flowers to music. The speaker would play her "Tambourin" (an old spelling) "among the April Woods." A tambourine is a noisy, jingling instrument, so she is no delicate songbird. Yet she quietly becomes the bird she offers. "Unwearied, all the summer long," she keeps going, then breaks "in wilder song / When Winter shook the boughs!" Hardship doesn't silence her. It makes her louder.

The form carries this confidence and then lets it slip. Longer lines of about four beats alternate with shorter ones of about three, which gives the opening a bouncy, hymn-like swing. The rhymes arrive like small triumphs: Rose and grows, Bird and heard, long and song. But the last two stanzas drop them. "What if they hear me! / Who shall say / That such an importunity / May not at last avail?" is breathless and broken, with no chime to steady it. "Importunity" is the longest, stiffest word in the poem, a formal term for pestering, and it is as if she has looked up the charge against herself and read it aloud.

The ending is the cleverest part. The sentence tangles itself in a hopeful double negative: it is not that they *may not* say yes, but that they *may*. The "Yes" is stranded between dashes, and when it finally arrives it isn't won by the roses or the song. They say it because they are "weary of this Beggar's face." That word answers the earlier "Unwearied": she never tires, so they must. Notice, too, that "me" has become "this Beggar's face" and "her." The speaker has stepped outside herself and is looking at her own pleading as the people inside the "Hall" would see it. She stands at the threshold of a grand house, and the yes she dreams of is really a way of being sent off.

That mix of comedy and ache is the poem's real achievement. The speaker is funny about her own desperation, and the joke doesn't hide the longing but lets it show. The poem never says who "them" might be, and it supports several readings: a reluctant loved one, a distant public, even something grander. We can take that openness as a choice, and it makes the poem stretch to fit any kind of wanting. It also carries a quiet irony, since Dickinson's poems mostly went unpublished while she lived and are now read by countless people. The poem's argument is that gifts and bargains may fail, but persistence, even when embarrassing, might not.

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