As Summer into Autumn slips — Poem analysis

Emily DickinsonContemplative

As Summer into Autumn slips And yet we sooner say "The Summer" than "the Autumn," lest We turn the sun away,

And almost count it an Affront The presence to concede Of one however lovely, not The one that we have loved --

So we evade the charge of Years On one attempting shy The Circumvention of the Shaft Of Life's Declivity.

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Nobody likes to be the first to say that summer is over. Dickinson builds a poem on that small reluctance, then uses her last four lines to show she has been talking about something far more personal than weather. On the surface, the speaker notices that we keep calling a season "Summer" even as it slides into "Autumn," afraid that naming the change would "turn the sun away." Beneath that, the seasons stand for stages of a life, and the poem becomes about the gentle conspiracy by which people avoid telling each other they are growing old. That reading is an inference from the final stanza, but the language there makes it hard to resist.

The first stanza carries its meaning in its grammar. It opens with "As Summer into Autumn slips," a clause that seems to be waiting for a conclusion. Instead we get "And yet," and the sentence swerves sideways, just as the season does. The logic that follows is almost childlike superstition: say the word and you might make it true, and the sun might leave. Yet the voice stays plain and matter-of-fact, and it says "we," not "I." This is a shared habit, and the reader is already implicated in it.

The second stanza raises the stakes with one sharp word, "Affront." To admit the new season, "however lovely," feels like an insult, though not to the season itself. The insult is to "The one that we have loved." The vocabulary of manners and loyalty ("Affront," "concede") turns the weather into a small social drama. Autumn is grudgingly allowed to be beautiful, but affection, the poem suggests, isn't transferable. The stanza ends on a dash, and the pause before the conclusion feels like a held breath.

Then comes "So," and the diction changes. Until now almost every word has been short and everyday. The last stanza brings in "evade," "Circumvention," "Shaft" and "Declivity," a Latinate, formal, nearly legal vocabulary. "The charge of Years" works like an accusation in court, and also like a burden laid on someone's shoulders. The images are deliberately hard to fit together. A "Shaft" can be an arrow or a ray of light, and a "Declivity" is a downward slope, so we seem to picture someone on a downhill path, shyly sidestepping something fired at them. Aging resists a single clean image, and the crowded phrasing suggests as much. "Attempting shy" is touching in its awkwardness: it is the embarrassed effort of a person pretending not to be in decline, and our politeness is what lets the pretence stand. The tone is tender but also faintly rueful, because the kindness is also a small dishonesty.

The form is quietly important. The poem is built in the hymn-like pattern known as common meter, with four-beat lines alternating with three-beat ones ("And YET we SOON-er SAY"). That steady, churchy rhythm holds firm while the content slips. The rhyme, meanwhile, loosens. In the first stanza "say" and "away" chime properly. In the second, "concede" and "loved" miss each other entirely. In the third, "shy" and "Declivity" only echo. I read this as the poem sliding out of summer's tidy completeness into something looser, though it may be coincidence. Dickinson's capitals also matter: "Summer," "Autumn," "Affront," "Years" and "Life's Declivity" are treated like characters in the drama, not ordinary nouns.

What makes the poem significant is how much it gets out of so little. It doesn't lament growing old in grand, tragic terms. It catches an ordinary, almost invisible kindness, the way we dodge the truth for someone's sake, and lets us feel the fear of mortality underneath. It also offers no comfort. The final word is "Declivity," so the poem ends on the slope itself, and the evasion, however gracious, doesn't change the direction of travel. In twelve compressed lines, Dickinson shows that politeness can be a form of love and a form of denial at the same moment.

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