The Tramp — Poem analysis

John ClareContemplative

He eats (a moment's stoppage to his song) The stolen turnip as he goes along; And hops along and heeds with careless eye The passing crowded stage coach reeling bye. He talks to none but wends his silent way, And finds a hovel at the close of day, Or under any hedge his house is made. He has no calling and he owns no trade. An old smoaked blanket arches oer his head, A whisp of straw or stubble makes his bed. He knows a lawless law that claims no kin But meet and plunder on and feel no sin-- No matter where they go or where they dwell They dally with the winds and laugh at hell.

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A man breaks off his singing just long enough to eat a turnip he hasn't paid for, then carries on. That small, almost comic moment opens John Clare's "The Tramp" and sets the terms for the rest: a life without ownership, schedule or shame. The parenthesis, "a moment's stoppage to his song", makes eating the interruption and singing the real business, which is a strange way to describe a man who is presumably hungry.

The poem is a portrait rather than a story. Nothing happens to the tramp. Clare watches him walk, eat and sleep, then steps back to say what kind of man he is. The fourteen lines are the length of a sonnet, though the form is not one: they run in seven rhymed couplets (song/along, eye/bye, way/day) in steady ten-syllable lines. The chiming pairs give a brisk, ballad-like pace that suits a man on the move, and most of them close neatly, so the sense stops where the rhyme falls. A line like "He has no calling and he owns no trade" lands with the flatness of a verdict. "Calling" is worth pausing on, since it means a job but also a vocation, something one is summoned to by God. Nobody has summoned this man.

Much of the poem's life comes from its contrasts. The tramp "hops along", a verb that makes him bird-like and light, a creature of the roadside. The stage coach he ignores is "crowded" and "reeling", lurching under its load. Respectable travel looks cramped and unsteady, while the man on foot keeps his balance, and his "careless eye" is free of care as well as indifferent. His shelter works the same way. The hedge is where "his house is made", and the inverted word order leaves "house" to arrive last, almost as an afterthought. "Any" tells us that one patch of ground is as good as another. Best of all is "An old smoaked blanket arches oer his head." Arches belongs to the vocabulary of churches and bridges, so a ragged blanket briefly becomes a vaulted roof. Then the "whisp of straw or stubble" brings us back down to earth. Clare's spellings, "smoaked", "oer" and "whisp", are kept as they appear here and give the lines a spoken, unpolished texture.

The last four lines change the focus. "He" becomes "they", and the individual turns into a whole tribe of wanderers who "meet and plunder on". The central phrase is the paradox "a lawless law", a code that exists but answers to nobody's authority and "claims no kin". The syntax here is packed and slightly tangled, and it tumbles forward without pause. The closing couplet is the most playful. To "dally with the winds" is to idle and flirt, and the wind is the only company the tramp seems to want. To "laugh at hell" is to refuse the threat that keeps respectable people in line.

Whether Clare approves is left open. "Plunder", "lawless" and "sin" are the words a settled society would use, and they hint at the suspicion such wanderers attracted. Yet the vivid details, the song, the arching blanket and the careless eye, are almost envious. Judging by the text, the poem holds both views at once: the tramp is a threat to order and also a picture of freedom, bought at the price of home, work and belonging.

That balance is what makes the poem worth reading. Clare is remembered as a poet of the English countryside, and he looks at a roadside figure with the same close attention he gives to the natural world, without sentimentality and without a sermon. In fourteen lines he asks what freedom costs, and who gets to call it a crime.

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