The Lout — Poem analysis

John ClareContemplative

For Sunday's play he never makes excuse, But plays at taw, and buys his Spanish juice. Hard as his toil, and ever slow to speak, Yet he gives maidens many a burning cheek; For none can pass him but his witless grace Of bawdry brings the blushes in her face. As vulgar as the dirt he treads upon He calls his cows or drives his horses on; He knows the lamest cow and strokes her side And often tries to mount her back and ride, And takes her tail at night in idle play, And makes her drag him homeward all the way. He knows of nothing but the football match, And where hens lay, and when the duck will hatch.

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Fourteen lines, no story, and a single man pinned down like a specimen. John Clare's "The Lout" is a character sketch of a young farm worker whose days are divided between hard labour and rough amusement. The speaker's verdict is in the title, and the opening lines seem to confirm it: this is a man who never misses "Sunday's play," who "plays at taw" (a game of marbles) and spends his pennies on "Spanish juice," or liquorice. Even his pleasures are childish. He is a grown man with a boy's appetites.

The portrait gets harsher. He is "Hard as his toil" and "ever slow to speak," yet his few words are enough to make "maidens" blush, because his "witless grace / Of bawdry" follows every girl who passes. "Witless grace" is the poem's sharpest phrase. Grace suggests ease and charm, and "witless" strips away any cleverness, so the phrase captures a clumsy, unthinking confidence. The simile that follows is blunter still: he is "As vulgar as the dirt he treads upon." The speaker ties him to the soil, as if he were made of the same stuff.

The form supports this brisk judgement. The poem is built from seven rhyming couplets in what reads as iambic pentameter, the steady ten-syllable line of English verse. Its fourteen lines echo a sonnet, but without the sonnet's turning argument. Instead each couplet snaps shut like a small verdict, and most lines end on a full stop or comma. The verbs pile up in a list: he "calls," "drives," "knows," "strokes," "tries," "takes," "makes." The effect is of someone ticking off habits rather than exploring a mind. Some of the rhymes are plain to the point of laziness. "Upon" and "on" are almost the same word, and the sound seems to trudge along with the man.

But the poem's second half complicates its own contempt. Once the lout is among his animals, the tone shifts from sneering to something closer to observation. He "knows the lamest cow and strokes her side," a detail that shows attention and a kind of gentleness. Then comes the comedy: he "tries to mount her back and ride," and at night he grabs her tail "in idle play" and "makes her drag him homeward all the way." The cow's patience carries the scene. Whether the speaker means it or not, the image makes the lout look less like a brute than like an overgrown child with a willing companion. The word "play," which opened the poem in "Sunday's play," returns here as "idle play," so his leisure and his work run together.

The final couplet delivers the cruellest line and undoes it at once. "He knows of nothing but the football match, / And where hens lay, and when the duck will hatch." Dismissed as ignorant, he turns out to hold the working knowledge of the farmyard, the kind that keeps a household fed. The rhyme of "match" with "hatch" sets his two worlds side by side, the village game and the nesting duck. The word "nothing" sits uneasily against what follows, which is quite a lot.

That uneasiness is where the poem's interest lies. Clare was the son of a farm labourer in rural Northamptonshire, so it is tempting to hear a double voice here, one that mocks the type and one that knows it from inside. That is an inference from his background rather than something the poem states, but the text does invite it. The portrait is too specific to be pure ridicule. Nobody notices which cow is lame unless they have watched closely, and the speaker notices.

What makes the poem worth reading is its refusal to prettify. There are no gentle shepherds or rosy milkmaids here, only a coarse, clumsy, oddly tender young man whom polite society would write off. The poem calls him a lout, then spends fourteen lines showing us more than the word allows.

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