Autumn — Poem analysis

John ClareCheerful

I love the fitful gust that shakes The casement all the day, And from the glossy elm tree takes The faded leaves away, Twirling them by the window pane With thousand others down the lane.

I love to see the shaking twig Dance till the shut of eve, The sparrow on the cottage rig, Whose chirp would make believe That Spring was just now flirting by In Summer's lap with flowers to lie.

I love to see the cottage smoke Curl upwards through the trees, The pigeons nestled round the cote On November days like these; The cock upon the dunghill crowing, The mill sails on the heath a-going.

The feather from the raven's breast Falls on the stubble lea, The acorns near the old crow's nest Drop pattering down the tree; The grunting pigs, that wait for all, Scramble and hurry where they fall.

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Autumn is usually the season of endings, and poets often use it to talk about loss. John Clare, a farm labourer's son from Helpston, does something stranger and warmer. He simply says "I love" and then lets the season's small, untidy details speak. The central idea is that autumn is not a funeral for the year but a busy, lived-in time in which everything gets used, from a falling leaf to a dropped acorn.

The structure makes this quiet argument. Each stanza is six lines, rhymed ABABCC, with a neat closing couplet. The first four lines alternate between longer and shorter lines (*"I love the fitful gust that shakes / The casement all the day"*), and the rhythm is a steady, walking-pace iambic beat. The couplets then ease into a tumbling run, as in *"Twirling them by the window pane / With thousand others down the lane."* The missing "a" before "thousand" sounds like speech, not formal verse. The stanza form is tidy, but the voice inside it is relaxed and countrified.

The word "love" is the poem's engine. It opens the first three stanzas, and the repetition gives the poem the feel of a list of private pleasures. Then in the final stanza it disappears. The speaker steps back, and the poem becomes pure watching: a feather falls, acorns drop, pigs scramble. This could be a loss, but it feels more like confidence. By now the love has been established, so the scene no longer needs announcing.

Clare's images also move steadily downward, so the poem seems to fall as the season does. It starts at the window, where the gust rattles the glass, then moves to the twig, the roof and the rising smoke. By the last stanza everything is heading for the ground: *"The feather from the raven's breast / Falls on the stubble lea."* The final line, *"Scramble and hurry where they fall,"* lands among the pigs. The poem ends at ground level, where the practical business of a farm goes on.

That ending is the poem's best surprise. Many poets would end on a fading leaf or a sigh. Clare ends on greedy, grunting animals, and this shows that the fall is a kind of delivery: the pigs *"wait for all."* The unglamorous nouns, "dunghill", "stubble", "grunting pigs", refuse to prettify the countryside. Even the sound words are down to earth. The acorns *"Drop pattering down the tree"*, and "pattering" makes the sound of small hard things hitting leaves and earth.

There is also a gentle trick with time in the second stanza. The sparrow's chirp *"would make believe / That Spring was just now flirting by / In Summer's lap with flowers to lie."* Clare personifies the seasons as playful, almost flirtatious figures, and autumn is overheard in the bird's song, where the other seasons seem to linger. The year is a cycle in which spring and summer are never fully gone. This matches the "faded" leaves in the first stanza, which are described next to a "glossy" elm. Fading and shine sit side by side.

Local vocabulary adds to the feeling that the writer knows this landscape from inside. "Rig" for the ridge of a roof, "cote" for a dovecote, "lea" for a meadow, and "a-going" for the turning mill sails all belong to ordinary rural speech. The word "casement" and the phrase "the shut of eve" place us in a cottage with the day closing like a door. Smoke curling through trees, pigeons nestled and a cock crowing build a picture of a working village, calm but never idle.

The poem's significance lies in this refusal to treat the countryside as scenery or as a lesson. Clare gives the same attention to a raven's feather as to a sparrow's song, and the result is a gentle democracy of detail. For a reader, the pleasure is in how much is noticed in so few lines, and in how a season usually linked to decline becomes, under Clare's eye, a time of movement, appetite and welcome.

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