Signs of Winter — Poem analysis

John ClareCheerful

The cat runs races with her tail. The dog Leaps oer the orchard hedge and knarls the grass. The swine run round and grunt and play with straw, Snatching out hasty mouthfuls from the stack. Sudden upon the elmtree tops the crow Unceremonious visit pays and croaks, Then swops away. From mossy barn the owl Bobs hasty out--wheels round and, scared as soon, As hastily retires. The ducks grow wild And from the muddy pond fly up and wheel A circle round the village and soon, tired, Plunge in the pond again. The maids in haste Snatch from the orchard hedge the mizzled clothes And laughing hurry in to keep them dry.

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Nowhere in "Signs of Winter" does John Clare mention cold, frost or snow. The word "winter" appears only in the title. What he gives us instead is a village where every creature seems to have caught the same nervous mood: the cat chases her own tail, the dog leaps the orchard hedge, the pigs snatch mouthfuls from the stack. The central idea is that a season can be felt before it is seen. It arrives as a jittery energy running through animals and people alike. The title's "signs" suggests the old country habit of reading the weather from how creatures behave, and the poem turns that habit into a piece of close, affectionate watching.

The form supports this restlessness. The poem has fourteen lines, the length of a sonnet, but it is unrhymed and has no neat turn at the end. It is blank verse, loosely iambic pentameter, and the first line is almost perfectly regular: "The cat runs races with her tail." After that, Clare keeps breaking his sentences in the middle of lines. "Then swops away. From mossy barn the owl / Bobs hasty out" starts a new sentence halfway through a line, and the grammar jostles against the metre. The dash in "Bobs hasty out--wheels round and, scared as soon, / As hastily retires" jolts the owl out of the barn and back in again within a couple of lines. The verse seems to dart about like the animals it describes.

Certain words keep coming back. "Hasty," "hastily," "haste" and "hurry" run through the poem, and the pigs "snatching" straw are echoed at the end by the maids who "Snatch" the washing from the hedge. Circular movement is just as persistent: the cat runs "races" after her tail, the pigs "run round," the owl "wheels round," and the ducks "wheel / A circle round the village" before plunging back into the pond they started from. All this energy goes nowhere in particular. It is the fidgeting of creatures who sense a change but can't settle.

Clare also gives the animals a gently comic social life. The crow "Unceremonious visit pays," like a neighbour who drops in without knocking, and the owl "retires" as a flustered guest might. The ducks "grow wild," then turn up "tired" and splash back down. The dialect words add to the texture. "Knarls" seems to mean that the dog snarls and worries at the grass, "swops" suggests a swooping flight, and "mizzled" describes clothes damp with fine rain. Even the spellings, "oer" and "elmtree," keep the voice rooted in country speech rather than polished drawing-room verse.

Only in the last two lines does weather properly enter. The maids pull the "mizzled clothes" from the orchard hedge and hurry indoors "laughing... to keep them dry." The hedge makes a quiet frame, since the dog leaped over it in line two and the washing hangs on it in line thirteen. The maids also join the pattern. They snatch, they hasten, and they are as caught up in the changing air as the pigs and ducks. The poem ends on laughter and a practical little task, not on dread. Winter, at this stage, is a reason for bustle, and the poem finds it more funny than frightening.

The poem is significant for what it leaves out. There is no "I," no moral and no lofty comment on the passing year. Clare, a poet of the Northamptonshire countryside, simply lets a run of quick glimpses add up to a mood, almost like a camera panning across a farmyard. Animals are treated as characters with their own moods and not as decoration. The humble human work of rescuing the laundry sits at the same level as a crow's visit or a cat's chase. By trusting small, exact details over big statements, the poem makes an ordinary rural afternoon feel alive with the approach of the cold.

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