Roses — Poem analysis

Joyce KilmerInspired

(For Katherine Bregy)

I went to gather roses and twine them in a ring, For I would make a posy, a posy for the King. I got an hundred roses, the loveliest there be, From the white rose vine and the pink rose bush and from the red rose tree. But when I took my posy and laid it at His feet I found He had His roses a million times more sweet. There was a scarlet blossom upon each foot and hand, And a great pink rose bloomed from His side for the healing of the land. Now of this fair and awful King there is this marvel told, That He wears a crown of linked thorns instead of one of gold. Where there are thorns are roses, and I saw a line of red, A little wreath of roses around His radiant head. A red rose is His Sacred Heart, a white rose is His face, And His breath has turned the barren world to a rich and flowery place. He is the Rose of Sharon, His gardener am I, And I shall drink His fragrance in Heaven when I die.

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Joyce Kilmer's "Roses" begins like a nursery rhyme and ends like a creed. A speaker sets out with a modest, almost childlike plan: gather roses, "twine them in a ring," and make "a posy for the King." The homely word "posy" sets the tone, since it is the kind of gift a child brings to someone it loves. Then comes the turn on "But," and the whole poem grows from one comparison. The hundred loveliest roses from vine, bush and tree cannot compete with the ones already blooming on Christ's body.

The central idea is that suffering, seen through Christian faith, is transformed into beauty. The wounds of the crucifixion become flowers: "a scarlet blossom upon each foot and hand," and "a great pink rose" from His side. The crown of thorns is redeemed too. "Where there are thorns are roses," the speaker announces, and a "line of red" becomes "a little wreath of roses" around His head. The rose is a flexible symbol here, standing for wound, blood, love and healing all at once. By the end even "the barren world" has become "a rich and flowery place." The speaker's gift is not rejected, only outdone. His roses are white, pink and red, and Christ's are scarlet, pink, red and white, so the same palette returns in a form he could never have grown himself.

The form suits this simplicity. The lines are long, roughly fourteen syllables with seven beats, and they rhyme in couplets. The fourteener is an old, rolling measure familiar from ballads and hymns. The lines are so long that they spill over on the page ("from the red / rose tree"), which gives the poem a breathless, gathering-up quality, like someone arms full of flowers. The rhymes are plain and sturdy: ring/King, feet/sweet, face/place. Some also do real work. "Hand" rhymes with "land," tying the wound to the healing of the world. "Told" rhymes with "gold," so the word for earthly royalty is set up only to be refused, since this King wears thorns "instead of one of gold."

The tenses trace a quiet journey. The opening is past tense, a small story of going out and coming back. At "Now of this fair and awful King" the poem shifts to the present and becomes teaching, almost doctrine. The last line looks forward: "I shall drink His fragrance in Heaven when I die." Anecdote becomes belief, and belief becomes hope. The speaker changes role as well. He starts as a flower-gatherer, taking from the garden for his own purposes, and ends as "His gardener," a servant in someone else's garden. The title "Rose of Sharon" comes from the Song of Solomon and, in Christian tradition, is applied to Christ.

Some of the wording is worth slowing down for. "Awful" is used in its older sense of inspiring awe, and paired with "fair" it holds terror and tenderness in a single phrase. "A million times more sweet" is cheerfully hyperbolic, the way a child would count. The senses build too. The poem is full of colour, and only in the last line does scent arrive, with the verb "drink" turning fragrance into something almost edible.

Part of the poem's interest lies in what it chooses to soften. A reader might ask whether turning nails and a spear wound into blossoms is too pretty, and whether "a little wreath" shrinks the thorns. The poem's answer is its faith: the beauty does not hide the pain but grows from it. The Sacred Heart, a specifically Catholic devotion, appears here as simply "a red rose."

Kilmer is best remembered for "Trees," and "Roses" shares its plain, singable manner and its habit of finding the divine in growing things. Its dedication "For Katherine Bregy" makes the poem a gift in its own right, a posy offered to a friend, while its lesson is that every human offering is humble beside what it honours.

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