Serenade (For Music) — Poem analysis

Oscar WildeRomantic

The western wind is blowing fair Across the dark AEgean sea, And at the secret marble stair My Tyrian galley waits for thee. Come down! the purple sail is spread, The watchman sleeps within the town, O leave thy lily-flowered bed, O Lady mine come down, come down!

She will not come, I know her well, Of lover's vows she hath no care, And little good a man can tell Of one so cruel and so fair. True love is but a woman's toy, They never know the lover's pain, And I who loved as loves a boy Must love in vain, must love in vain.

O noble pilot, tell me true, Is that the sheen of golden hair? Or is it but the tangled dew That binds the passion-flowers there? Good sailor come and tell me now Is that my Lady's lily hand? Or is it but the gleaming prow, Or is it but the silver sand?

No! no! 'tis not the tangled dew, 'Tis not the silver-fretted sand, It is my own dear Lady true With golden hair and lily hand! O noble pilot, steer for Troy, Good sailor, ply the labouring oar, This is the Queen of life and joy Whom we must bear from Grecian shore!

The waning sky grows faint and blue, It wants an hour still of day, Aboard! aboard! my gallant crew, O Lady mine, away! away! O noble pilot, steer for Troy, Good sailor, ply the labouring oar, O loved as only loves a boy! O loved for ever evermore!

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A lover has a ship moored at a secret marble stair and one wish: that the lady he calls "Lady mine" will come down and sail away with him. In Wilde's "Serenade" everything is ready. The wind is fair, the "purple sail is spread," and even the watchman "sleeps within the town." Only the woman is missing, and her absence is the poem's real subject. She never speaks and never appears. By the end we may suspect that the lover is leaving with a wish rather than a person.

The stanzas follow his changing moods. The first is a coaxing invitation. The second collapses into bitterness: "She will not come, I know her well," he says, then settles on the sour verdict that "True love is but a woman's toy." That is wounded pride talking, and the next admission gives him away: "I who loved as loves a boy / Must love in vain, must love in vain." The doubled phrase sounds almost like a man relishing his own ache.

The turning point is slippery. In the third stanza he asks the "noble pilot" whether the gleam he sees is "golden hair" or "tangled dew," her "lily hand" or "the gleaming prow," or only "the silver sand." The pilot never answers, so the lover does it himself: "No! no! 'tis not the tangled dew." He then recycles his own words, and the "golden hair and lily hand" he offered as possibilities are now declared fact. The rhyme helps him cheat. "Dew" is tied to "true," and "sand" to "hand," so the sound of the verse seems to confirm what his eyes could not. He has talked himself into certainty.

The form carries this persuasion. There are five stanzas of eight lines, each rhymed ABABCDCD, in a brisk iambic tetrameter that rocks like oars: "The WEST-ern WIND is BLOW-ing FAIR." The regularity makes it singable, as the subtitle "For Music" promises, and repetition does the rest. We hear "come down, come down," then "Aboard! aboard!" and "away! away!" The two-line refrain "O noble pilot, steer for Troy, / Good sailor, ply the labouring oar" returns in the last two stanzas. The poem ends by echoing the earlier boast: "O loved as only loves a boy! / O loved for ever evermore!" The piled-up eternity of "for ever evermore" feels like a man protesting a little too much.

The imagery is a jeweller's palette of marble, purple, gold, silver and lilies. A "Tyrian galley" and a "Grecian shore" place us in an ancient Mediterranean made of surfaces and colours, closer to a tapestry than to a real harbour. Nothing is muddy or uncertain, which suits a fantasy. One detail is also quite practical. Troy lies across the Aegean to the east, so a west wind really is fair for the voyage.

Troy is the destination, and it is a loaded one. Carrying a "Queen of life and joy" from a Greek shore to Troy casts the lover as a Paris figure, stealing a beauty away. Anyone who knows that story knows the city's fate. Whether Wilde intends a warning is for the reader to judge, but the closing stanza offers no safe harbour. The sky is "waning," time is short, and the lover is shouting orders to a crew while the lady remains unseen.

Wilde is remembered today above all for his plays and for *The Picture of Dorian Gray*, and this lyric shows a gentler, more musical side of his writing. Its interest is that it works in two ways at once. On the surface it is a shimmering song you could happily sing. Underneath, it quietly watches its speaker persuade himself that dew is hair, sand is a hand, and a silent window is a yes. The music is so persuasive that we nearly believe him too.

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