136. Prayer—O Thou Dread Power — Poem analysis

Robert BurnsContemplative

O THOU dread Power, who reign’st above, I know thou wilt me hear, When for this scene of peace and love, I make this prayer sincere.

The hoary Sire—the mortal stroke, Long, long be pleas’d to spare; To bless this little filial flock, And show what good men are.

She, who her lovely offspring eyes With tender hopes and fears, O bless her with a mother’s joys, But spare a mother’s tears!

Their hope, their stay, their darling youth. In manhood’s dawning blush, Bless him, Thou God of love and truth, Up to a parent’s wish.

The beauteous, seraph sister-band— With earnest tears I pray— Thou know’st the snares on ev’ry hand, Guide Thou their steps alway.

When, soon or late, they reach that coast, O’er Life’s rough ocean driven, May they rejoice, no wand’rer lost, A family in Heaven!

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Robert Burns, the Scottish poet (1759–1796), is usually remembered for his wit, his songs and his sharp eye for hypocrisy. "Prayer—O Thou Dread Power" shows a quieter, more tender side. The speaker looks at a household, probably one that is not his own, and asks God to look after each member in turn. Nothing in the poem tells us whose household it is, but the phrase "this scene of peace and love" suggests he is an onlooker moved by what he sees, and he turns that feeling into a petition.

The poem's structure is its most interesting feature. It moves through the family like a slow, careful roll call: the "hoary Sire," then the mother, then the "darling youth," then the "seraph sister-band." Each gets one stanza, and each gets a different request. The father is to be spared "the mortal stroke," a blunt phrase that makes death sound like a blow. The mother is asked for "a mother's joys" but spared "a mother's tears," and the repeated word "spare" links her stanza to her husband's. The son is blessed "up to a parent's wish," as if the parents' hopes were a height he must climb to. The daughters, by contrast, need guidance more than blessing: "Thou know'st the snares on ev'ry hand." The speaker never says what the snares are. That tactful vagueness suggests a danger too delicate to name, and it sits uneasily beside the word "seraph," which makes the sisters sound like angels who must still walk through a world of traps. By modern standards the poem divides its hopes along gender lines, with the son's future treated as a rise and the daughters' as a hazard.

The form helps the prayer sound steady and sincere. Each stanza is a quatrain rhymed ABAB, and the lines alternate between four beats and three, a rhythm close to a hymn. The long line makes a request and the short line seems to catch its breath. Take "I know thou wilt me hear" in the opening stanza. It is plain and confident, and it places the speaker's trust before any request is made. Some of the rhymes are imperfect, such as "blush" with "wish" and "coast" with "lost," but the looseness suits a prayer that is heartfelt rather than polished. The vocabulary is almost entirely standard English rather than Scots, with formal touches like "reign'st" and "know'st" that suit the reverent tone.

The imagery gathers itself in the last two stanzas. Until then the poem has dealt in human scenes: a mother's watchful eyes, a young man's "dawning blush." Then the speaker turns life into a sea voyage. The family is "driven" over "Life's rough ocean" toward a "coast," and the earlier "snares" now sit alongside storms and the risk of being a "wand'rer lost." The metaphor changes the earlier requests. Asking God to "guide their steps" is no longer only about avoiding temptation. It is about steering a ship home. The poem ends on a single exclamation, "A family in Heaven!", and it is the only one in the poem. After five stanzas of quiet pleading, the speaker allows himself a burst of joy at the picture of everyone arriving together.

That ending is the poem's central idea. The speaker does not pray for wealth, fame or long life for the family, though he wants the father spared. What he wants most is that nobody is left behind, that the bond between them survives the voyage and the crossing. The word "family" arrives last, and the whole prayer has been leading to it. Even the earlier phrase "little filial flock" hints at this, because a flock stays together and is watched over.

The poem matters because it shows how much feeling a short, simple form can hold. It has no argument and no satire, only goodwill carefully arranged. It also shows a Burns whose attention goes to ordinary domestic life, and who treats a family's closeness as something precious enough to ask heaven to protect. The speaker's own "earnest tears" appear in the fifth stanza, which tells us that watching this household moves him as much as it moves the mother he prays for.

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