Says. — Poem analysis

Walt WhitmanInspired

1 I SAY whatever tastes sweet to the most perfect person, that is finally right. 2 I say nourish a great intellect, a great brain; If I have said anything to the contrary, I hereby retract it.

3 I say man shall not hold property in man; I say the least developed person on earth is just as important and sacred to himself or herself, as the most developed person is to himself or herself.

4 I say where liberty draws not the blood out of slavery, there slavery draws the blood out of liberty, I say the word of the good old cause in These States, and resound it hence over the world.

5 I say the human shape or face is so great, it must never be made ridiculous; I say for ornaments nothing outre can be allowed, And that anything is most beautiful without ornament, And that exaggerations will be sternly revenged in your own physiology, and in other persons’ physiology also; And I say that clean-shaped children can be jetted and conceived only where natural forms prevail in public, and the human face and form are never caricatured; And I say that genius need never more be turned to romances, (For facts properly told, how mean appear all romances.)

6 I say the word of lands fearing nothing—I will have no other land; I say discuss all and expose all—I am for every topic openly; I say there can be no salvation for These States without innovators—without free tongues, and ears willing to hear the tongues; And I announce as a glory of These States, that they respectfully listen to propositions, reforms, fresh views and doctrines, from successions of men and women, Each age with its own growth.

7 I have said many times that materials and the Soul are great, and that all depends on physique; Now I reverse what I said, and affirm that all depends on the æsthetic or intellectual, And that criticism is great—and that refinement is greatest of all; And I affirm now that the mind governs—and that all depends on the mind.

8 With one man or woman—(no matter which one—I even pick out the lowest,) With him or her I now illustrate the whole law; I say that every right, in politics or what-not, shall be eligible to that one man or woman, on the same terms as any.

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Almost every line of Walt Whitman's "Says" begins with the same two words: "I say." The poem sounds like a speaker standing on a box in a public square, announcing his convictions one after another. The convictions pull in several directions. He insists that every person is equal and sacred, that free speech is the life of a nation, and that the human body should not be made ridiculous. Then, in the middle of all this certainty, he cheerfully takes something back.

The structure is the first thing to notice. Eight numbered sections work like articles in a manifesto or a legal code, and the repeated "I say" (anaphora) gives the poem its drumbeat. There is no rhyme and no regular metre. This is free verse, and the rhythm comes from parallel phrasing and long, speech-like lines. Some are so long that the printed text has to wrap them and indent the overflow, as if the speaker cannot stop before the page runs out. The effect is that of someone talking rather than composing, which suits a poem whose subject is the right to speak.

The ideas are bold but grounded in physical images. In the first section, truth is something that "tastes sweet." The fourth section builds a neat reversal: "where liberty draws not the blood out of slavery, there slavery draws the blood out of liberty." The sentence is a trap that closes on itself. Freedom and slavery cannot sit side by side, and one will drain the other, so the image of blood makes a political principle feel like a wound. Elsewhere the poem states plainly that "man shall not hold property in man." It also declares that "the least developed person on earth" is as sacred to himself or herself as the most developed person is.

The fifth section is the strangest. Whitman turns to the human face and form, which "must never be made ridiculous," and warns that "exaggerations will be sternly revenged in your own physiology." He seems to treat the body as a moral record, one that punishes distortion. He also praises what is plain and natural over what is ornamental. The parenthesis that follows, "(For facts properly told, how mean appear all romances)," ranks truthful, direct writing above invented stories. Whitman is again preferring the real to the decorated.

The sixth section turns from the body to the nation. The phrase "These States" recurs, and Whitman says they can find no salvation "without innovators—without free tongues, and ears willing to hear the tongues." The second half of that phrase is easy to overlook. A democracy needs listeners as well as speakers, and Whitman counts willingness to hear as a civic virtue. The section ends on a short line, "Each age with its own growth," which suggests that no generation's ideas should bind the next.

The seventh section is the most surprising. Whitman says he has often claimed that "materials and the Soul are great, and that all depends on physique." Then he writes, "Now I reverse what I said," and declares that everything depends on the mind, with refinement "greatest of all." He had already joked in section 2, "If I have said anything to the contrary, I hereby retract it," and now he really does contradict himself. This is not carelessness. His other great poem, "Song of Myself," says outright that he is willing to contradict himself, and here the habit is built into the argument. A poem that praises "fresh views" and "each age with its own growth" would be odd if its speaker never changed his own view.

The final section ties these threads together. Whitman picks one person, "even … the lowest," and uses that person to "illustrate the whole law": every right must be open to this individual "on the same terms as any." This resolves an apparent tension. He prizes refinement and intellect, yet he refuses to let those qualities become a ranking system. Aspiration is encouraged, but rights do not depend on it.

The poem matters because it shows democratic thinking as a way of behaving, not just a list of opinions. Whitman argues for equality and open debate, and he also practises them by arguing with himself in public. The reader is left with a speaker who is forceful and also willing to be corrected.

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