France, the 18th year of These States. — Poem analysis

Walt WhitmanCheerful

1 A GREAT year and place; A harsh, discordant, natal scream out-sounding, to touch the mother’s heart closer than any yet.

I walk’d the shores of my Eastern Sea, Heard over the waves the little voice, Saw the divine infant, where she woke, mournfully wailing, amid the roar of cannon, curses, shouts, crash of falling buildings; Was not so sick from the blood in the gutters running—nor from the single corpses, nor those in heaps, nor those borne away in the tumbrils; Was not so desperate at the battues of death—was not so shock’d at the repeated fusillades of the guns.

2 Pale, silent, stern, what could I say to that long-accrued retribution? Could I wish humanity different? Could I wish the people made of wood and stone? Or that there be no justice in destiny or time?

3 O Liberty! O mate for me! Here too the blaze, the grape-shot and the axe, in reserve, to fetch them out in case of need; Here too, though long represt, can never be destroy’d; Here too could rise at last, murdering and extatic; Here too demanding full arrears of vengeance.

4 Hence I sign this salute over the sea, And I do not deny that terrible red birth and baptism, But remember the little voice that I heard wailing—and wait with perfect trust, no matter how long; And from to-day, sad and cogent, I maintain the bequeath’d cause, as for all lands, And I send these words to Paris with my love, And I guess some chansonniers there will understand them, For I guess there is latent music yet in France—floods of it; O I hear already the bustle of instruments—they will soon be drowning all that would interrupt them; O I think the east wind brings a triumphal and free march, It reaches hither—it swells me to joyful madness, I will run transpose it in words, to justify it, I will yet sing a song for you, MA FEMME.

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Whitman starts with a baby's cry, and the choice sets the tone for the whole poem. The "great year and place" of the title gives us a newborn Liberty, a "divine infant" who wakes "mournfully wailing, amid the roar of cannon, curses, shouts, crash of falling buildings." Whitman counted years from American independence, and if he does so here, the title points to the French Revolution in the 1790s, though the poem itself never says so. What it does say is plain enough: a new freedom is being born in terrible circumstances, and the speaker, watching from across his "Eastern Sea," refuses to look away.

The first section is built on a clever negation. He "was not so sick" at the blood in the gutters, the corpses, the tumbrils, the "battues of death," the "repeated fusillades." Each item gets its own "nor," and the list is long and grim. But the grammar keeps insisting that something mattered more than all this horror: the "little voice" he heard over the waves. The word "battues" is a hunting term for driving game toward the guns, and it makes the killing feel mechanical and cold. Even so, the speaker keeps his attention on the infant.

Section 2 slows down. The line "Pale, silent, stern" gives us a man stunned into stillness, and then come the questions: "Could I wish humanity different? / Could I wish the people made of wood and stone?" The repeated "Could I wish" turns his reaction into an argument. People are flesh, and they do not endure wrong forever without answering it. The phrase "long-accrued retribution" borrows the language of accounts, as if injustice were a debt gathering interest until someone has to pay. Section 3 pushes this further with "arrears of vengeance." Whitman does not celebrate the violence, but he treats it as the settling of a bill.

Then comes the turn that makes the poem more than a report on France. "O Liberty! O mate for me!" is a personal cry, and the next lines bring the revolution home. "Here too" opens five lines in a row, like a drumbeat. The "blaze, the grape-shot and the axe" are "in reserve" in America as well, "long represt" but "never… destroy'd," ready to rise "murdering and extatic." The odd, charged pairing of those last two words shows how close Whitman thinks liberty's joy and its violence can be. It is a warning to his own country, and an uneasy one.

The last section shifts from blood to sound. He signs his "salute over the sea," refuses to "deny that terrible red birth and baptism," and chooses to "wait with perfect trust, no matter how long." The imagery turns to music: "chansonniers," "latent music," "floods of it," "the bustle of instruments." The revolution's roar of cannon becomes an orchestra tuning up, one that will soon be "drowning all that would interrupt." The east wind carries "a triumphal and free march" across the Atlantic, and the speaker is swollen "to joyful madness." The baby's scream was the first note, and the poem imagines it growing into a song. The final line, "I will yet sing a song for you, MA FEMME," drops into French and into capitals. Liberty and France are now his beloved, "my wife," and the poem ends as a love song.

The form fits the message. There is no rhyme and no regular meter. Whitman's long, breath-driven lines surge forward and sometimes spill onto indented continuation lines. Repetition does the work of structure, through the "nor… nor… nor" of the first section, the "Could I wish" questions, and the hammering "Here too." The sentences swell and break the way a crowd does.

The poem is significant because it will not take the easy positions. It neither condemns the revolution for its bloodshed nor cheers it without cost. It holds both truths, "terrible" and "divine," in one frame, and then looks forward with a stubborn, almost reckless hope. It also makes the French story an American one, suggesting that liberty is never finished and never safe, and that the music it promises has to be earned.

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