On Journeys Through The States. — Poem analysis

Walt WhitmanInspired

ON journeys through the States we start, (Ay, through the world—urged by these songs, Sailing henceforth to every land—to every sea;) We, willing learners of all, teachers of all, and lovers of all.

We have watch’d the seasons dispensing themselves, and passing on, We have said, Why should not a man or woman do as much as the seasons, and effuse as much?

We dwell a while in every city and town; We pass through Kanada, the north-east, the vast valley of the Mississippi, and the Southern States; We confer on equal terms with each of The States, We make trial of ourselves, and invite men and women to hear; We say to ourselves, Remember, fear not, be candid, promulge the body and the Soul; Dwell a while and pass on—Be copious, temperate, chaste, magnetic, And what you effuse may then return as the seasons return, And may be just as much as the seasons.

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Whitman's travellers carry no luggage and no fixed destination. They carry only a way of living, and the poem's whole argument is that this is enough. The "journeys through the States" start as a trip across a country, but the first stanza quickly widens the map: "Ay, through the world," "to every land—to every sea." The parenthesis is revealing. The journey is "urged by these songs," so the poems themselves seem to be the travellers, or at least the ones pushing the travellers on. The stanza ends with a line that sums up the attitude of the whole piece: "willing learners of all, teachers of all, and lovers of all." Each role is repeated with the same little word, "all," and no one is left out.

The second stanza supplies the central idea, and it arrives as a question. The travellers have "watch'd the seasons dispensing themselves" and wonder why a person should not "do as much as the seasons, and effuse as much?" "Effuse" is an unusual word, meaning to pour out freely, and Whitman uses it twice more before the end. The seasons make an effective model because they never hoard. Spring does not save its blossoms and winter does not apologise for its snow. Each one gives itself completely and then moves aside. Whitman's proposal is that people should live with the same open-handed regularity.

The last stanza turns this into a kind of travelling code, and the grammar shifts to match. The poem has been describing "we," and now "we" start talking to themselves: "Remember, fear not, be candid, promulge the body and the Soul." The commands come quickly, and the list that follows is surprising: "copious, temperate, chaste, magnetic." Two of these words suggest abundance and attraction, while two suggest restraint. Pairing them makes the ideal richer than simple self-expression. Pour yourself out, the poem says, but with measure and self-command. The earlier "Dwell a while and pass on" is repeated almost word for word later, and it works like a refrain. It describes a way of staying that is also a way of leaving, with no clinging and no rushing.

The poem ends on a promise of return. What you "effuse may then return as the seasons return, / And may be just as much as the seasons." The ending is closed in a loop, and the repeated verb "return" makes the sentence itself circle back. Generosity here is a rhythm that comes back around, not a sacrifice. The modal "may," used twice, keeps this honest, since it is a hope and not a guarantee.

Formally, the poem has no rhyme and no regular metre. Whitman is known for free verse, and this piece shows how it works. The lines vary wildly in length. Some are short, like "Dwell a while and pass on," and one is so long that in this printing it spills onto a second and third line: "We pass through Kanada, the north-east, the vast valley of the Mississippi, and the Southern States." That one line holds a whole continent, and its sprawl enacts the travelling it describes. The repeated "We" at the start of line after line supplies the beat instead of rhyme. It is a drumroll of shared action: "We dwell," "We pass," "We confer," "We make trial," "We say."

There is democratic politics in the details too. The travellers "confer on equal terms with each of The States," and the capital T on "The" gives each state the dignity of a proper name. They also "invite men and women to hear," naming both together, as they did earlier with "a man or woman." The spelling "Kanada" is a small oddity worth noticing, because it makes the familiar map look slightly foreign and shows that the speaker's attention is on the sound and look of the places themselves.

The poem's significance lies in this combination of large ambition and simple instruction. It shows a poet imagining his work as a travelling companion, and it turns a theory of how to live into something as plain as the weather.

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