Ashes of Soldiers. — Poem analysis

Walt WhitmanContemplative

ASHES of soldiers! As I muse, retrospective, murmuring a chant in thought, Lo! the war resumes—again to my sense your shapes, And again the advance of armies.

Noiseless as mists and vapors, From their graves in the trenches ascending, From the cemeteries all through Virginia and Tennessee, From every point of the compass, out of the countless unnamed graves, In wafted clouds, in myraids large, or squads of twos or threes, or single ones, they come, And silently gather round me.

Now sound no note, O trumpeters! Not at the head of my cavalry, parading on spirited horses, With sabres drawn and glist’ning, and carbines by their thighs—(ah, my brave horsemen! My handsome, tan-faced horsemen! what life, what joy and pride, With all the perils, were yours!)

Nor you drummers—neither at reveille, at dawn, Nor the long roll alarming the camp—nor even the muffled beat for a burial; Nothing from you, this time, O drummers, bearing my warlike drums.

But aside from these, and the marts of wealth, and the crowded promenade, Admitting around me comrades close, unseen by the rest, and voiceless, The slain elate and alive again—the dust and debris alive, I chant this chant of my silent soul, in the name of all dead soldiers.

Faces so pale, with wondrous eyes, very dear, gather closer yet; Draw close, but speak not.

Phantoms of countless lost! Invisible to the rest, henceforth become my companions! Follow me ever! desert me not, while I live.

Sweet are the blooming cheeks of the living! sweet are the musical voices sounding! But sweet, ah sweet, are the dead, with their silent eyes.

Dearest comrades! all is over and long gone; But love is not over—and what love, O comrades! Perfume from battle-fields rising—up from foetor arising.

Perfume therefore my chant, O love! immortal Love! Give me to bathe the memories of all dead soldiers, Shroud them, embalm them, cover them all over with tender pride!

Perfume all! make all wholesome! Make these ashes to nourish and blossom, O love! O chant! solve all, fructify all with the last chemistry.

Give me exhaustless—make me a fountain, That I exhale love from me wherever I go, like a moist perennial dew, For the ashes of all dead soldiers.

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Most war poems want music: trumpets, marching rhythms, a rousing finish. Walt Whitman's "Ashes of Soldiers" does the opposite and orders the music to stop. The speaker is visited by the dead, who rise "noiseless as mists and vapors" from graves "all through Virginia and Tennessee," and the poem becomes a way of keeping faith with them. Its central idea is that the proper tribute to fallen soldiers is not a parade or a funeral march but love, a love strong enough to overpower the stench of death and turn it into something that feeds new life.

The poem is built as a series of commands to different listeners. First come the trumpeters and the cavalry, then the drummers, then the ghosts ("Draw close, but speak not"), and finally "love" itself. The speaker rejects the sounds of army life one by one: the cavalry parade, the reveille at dawn, the alarming "long roll," and even "the muffled beat for a burial." Refusing the funeral drum is the boldest of these refusals, since it suggests that ceremony, however respectful, is still noise that comes between the living and the dead. Even the poem's "chant" is called a chant "of my silent soul," a small paradox that tells us the real conversation happens beyond speech.

There is no rhyme and no regular meter. Whitman uses free verse, and its rhythm comes from repetition and from lines that swell and shrink. Some run long, piling up phrases ("in wafted clouds, in myraids large, or squads of twos or threes, or single ones, they come"), so that the sentence itself seems to gather ghosts as it goes. Others are curt: "Draw close, but speak not." The repeated "O" of address (O trumpeters, O drummers, O comrades, O love) gives the poem the feel of a ritual spoken aloud. Near the end, the word "all" returns again and again: "Perfume all! make all wholesome!", "solve all, fructify all." The dead are countless and mostly "unnamed," and the insistent "all" refuses to let any of them be left out.

One moment of individual feeling interrupts this large view. In the parenthesis about the cavalry, the speaker cries out, "ah, my brave horsemen! / My handsome, tan-faced horsemen!" The details of tanned faces and drawn sabres bring back a living, proud body, and the speaker's possessive "my" shows how personal the loss is. The poem keeps moving between this closeness and the vast crowd of the dead.

The imagery is most surprising in the final third. Whitman does not pretend that death smells sweet. He writes of "foetor," the stench of rotting flesh, and then insists that a "perfume from battle-fields" rises from it. The sweetness is not in the corpses but in the love they inspire, which is why the line "sweet, ah sweet, are the dead, with their silent eyes" feels both tender and a little shocking. The verbs that follow, "perfume," "bathe," "shroud," "embalm," treat love as a kind of funeral practice. But the poem pushes past preservation. "Make these ashes to nourish and blossom," the speaker asks, and the "last chemistry" he calls for is a natural process in which decay becomes fertile ground. The final image, a fountain giving off "moist perennial dew," moves from death to growth. Dew is gentle and quiet, and it returns every morning, which makes it a fitting symbol for remembrance.

What makes the poem significant is its honesty about grief combined with its refusal of glory. It does not celebrate victory or justify the war. Instead, it sets the soldiers' memory apart from "the marts of wealth, and the crowded promenade," where ordinary life goes on, and gives the speaker the job of carrying the dead with him: "Follow me ever! desert me not, while I live." The poem asks what the living owe those who died, and its answer is to keep loving them, quietly and for as long as we can.

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