An Autumn Reverie — Poem analysis

Alas! Beautiful Summer now hath fled, And the face of Nature doth seem dead, And the leaves are withered, and falling off the trees, By the nipping and chilling autumnal breeze.

The pleasures of the little birds are all fled, And with the cold many of them will be found dead, Because the leaves of the trees are scattered in the blast, And makes the feathered creatures feel downcast.

Because there are no leaves on the trees to shield them from the storm On a windy, and rainy, cloudy morn; Which makes their little hearts throb with pain, By the chilling blast and the pitiless rain.

But still they are more contented than the children of God, As long as they can pick up a worm from the sod, Or anything they can get to eat, Just, for instance, a stale crust of bread or a grain of wheat.

Oh! Think of the little birds in the time of the snow, Also of the little street waifs, that are driven to and fro, And trembling in the cold blast, and chilled to the bone, For the want of food and clothing, and a warm home.

Besides think of the sorrows of the wandering poor, That are wandering in the cold blast from door to door; And begging, for Heaven's sake, a crust of bread, And alas! Not knowing where to lay their head.

While the rich are well fed and covered from the cold, While the poor are starving, both young and old; Alas! It is the case in this boasted Christian land, Where as the rich are told to be kind to the poor, is God's command.

Oh! Think of the working man when he's no work to do, Who's got a wife and family, perhaps four or two, And the father searching for work, and no work can be had, The thought, I'm sure, 'tis enough to drive the poor man mad.

Because for his wife and family he must feel, And perhaps the thought thereof will cause him to steal Bread for his family, that are starving at home, While the thought thereof makes him sigh heavily and groan.

Alas! The pangs of hunger are very hard to hide, And few people can their temper control, Or become reconciled to their fate, Especially when they cannot find anything to eat.

Oh! Think of the struggles of the poor to make a living, Because the rich unto them seldom are giving; Wereas they are told he that giveth to the poor lendeth unto the Lord, But alas! they rather incline their money to hoard.

Then theres the little news-vendors in the street, Running about perhaps with bare feet; And if the rich chance to see such creatures in the street, In general they make a sudden retreat.

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A reverie is a drifting, dreamy kind of thinking, and the poem begins as if it will be one. Summer has "fled," the "face of Nature doth seem dead," and the leaves fall in a "nipping and chilling autumnal breeze." Yet by the fourth stanza the speaker has stopped musing and started preaching. The cold birds turn out to be a doorway into the real subject, which is human hardship and the failure of the comfortable to do anything about it.

The pivot comes in a surprising line: the birds, we are told, "are more contented than the children of God, / As long as they can pick up a worm from the sod." The comparison is bitterly ironic. A bird is satisfied with "a stale crust of bread or a grain of wheat," while people made in God's image cannot count on even that. From here the poem slides from one set of shivering creatures to another in a single sentence: "Oh! Think of the little birds in the time of the snow, / Also of the little street waifs." The word "little" keeps returning, and in the last stanza the news-vendors are called "such creatures," echoing the "feathered creatures" of the second. The echo quietly asks us to see these children as vulnerable and overlooked, much as we see the birds.

After that the circle widens. We meet the "wandering poor" begging "from door to door," then the unemployed working man with "a wife and family, perhaps four or two." That casual "perhaps" gives him a believable ordinariness. This stanza is the poem's most thoughtful moment. The speaker does not condemn the man who might "steal / Bread for his family" but explains the pressure that could drive him there, since the thought alone is "enough to drive the poor man mad." Stanza ten generalises the point: hunger is hard to hide, and few can control their tempers when they "cannot find anything to eat."

The accusation lands hardest on religious hypocrisy. This is a "boasted Christian land," where the rich "are told to be kind to the poor," yet "rather incline their money to hoard." The reference to those who give to the poor lending "unto the Lord" draws on a well-known biblical idea, and the poet uses it as a rebuke. The verb "told" matters here, because the rich have heard the command and ignore it. Words like "Heaven's sake" and "God's command" make the neglect a moral failing as well as a social one.

Formally, the poem is twelve quatrains, mostly in rhyming couplets: fled/dead, poor/door, do/two. The lines are long and loose, with no steady beat, and the rhymes often seem to steer the sentence rather than follow it. "Just, for instance, a stale crust of bread or a grain of wheat" sounds like speech stretched until it reaches "eat." In stanza ten the pattern collapses altogether (hide, control, fate, eat), and the final stanza rhymes "street" with "street." Such roughness gives the poem the sound of someone talking urgently, more concerned to be heard than to be graceful. The repeated "Alas!" and the commands "Oh! Think of" and "Besides think of" work like a preacher's refrain, making the reader responsible for what is described.

The ending is abrupt. The speaker offers no prayer, comfort or solution, only a picture of the rich who, on seeing barefoot boys, "make a sudden retreat." After a poem that has told us repeatedly to "think," the closing image shows what many do instead, which is look away.

The poem is worth studying because it shows a poet turning a seasonal subject into social protest, and because it shows how form and feeling pull against each other. The rhythms stumble and the phrasing can be clumsy, but the moral anger is clear in every stanza. The poem works through plain repetition and a steady widening of sympathy, from birds to waifs to workers, until the reader is left facing the question of who is willing to look.

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