Trades — Poem analysis

Amy LowellCheerful

I WANT to be a carpenter. To work all day long in clean wood, Shaving it into little thin slivers Which screw up into curls behind my plane ; Pounding square, black nails into white boards. With the claws of my hammer glistening Like the tongue of a snake. I want to shingle a house. Sitting on the ridge pole in a bright breeze. I want to put the shingles on neatly. Taking great care that each is directly between two others. I want my hands to have the tang of wood : Spruce, Cedar, Cypress. I want to draw a line on a board with a flat pencil. And then saw along that line. With the sweet-smelling sawdust piling up in yellow heap at my feet. That is the life ! Heigh-ho ! It is much easier than to write this poem.

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Before its final line delivers a knowing wink, Amy Lowell’s “Trades” reads like a love letter to carpentry. Lowell, an American poet who helped lead the Imagist movement in the early twentieth century, wrote in a period when many poets were rejecting ornate Victorian language in favor of hard, clear pictures and the cadences of ordinary speech. “Trades,” from her 1919 collection Pictures of the Floating World, belongs to that modern turn: its speaker does not describe an abstract longing but names tools, materials, and motions as if they were themselves the subject of the poem.

The speaker’s desire is a checklist of concrete satisfactions. Work all day in clean wood. Shave it into thin slivers that screw into curls behind a plane. Pound square black nails into white boards. Sit on a ridge pole in a bright breeze and lay shingles with perfect spacing. These are not grand ambitions, but they are exact. The central idea grows from that exactness: manual craft offers a completeness and a sensory reward that writing often withholds. The title “Trades” quietly puns on skilled occupations and on exchanging one kind of work for another. The speaker is not really planning a career change; the poem is a daydream about wanting a task whose success can be seen, touched, and smelled.

The poem’s construction matches its subject. It is free verse, with no regular rhyme or meter, but it establishes a strong pulse through repetition. The phrase “I want” returns like a hammer tap, each time introducing a new image. Some lines are short and clean—“I want to shingle a house”—while others spill into a simile, as when the hammer’s claws glisten “like the tongue of a snake.” That comparison is both precise and faintly dangerous, a reminder that real tools have an edge. Lowell’s imagery is overwhelmingly sensory: the speaker wants hands to have “the tang of wood: Spruce, Cedar, Cypress,” and sawdust piles “in yellow heap at my feet.” Words like clean, square, neat, and sweet-smelling do quiet work throughout, insisting on surfaces, textures, and exact placement rather than vague emotion.

Rhythm also comes from line breaks that mimic the careful acts they describe. The phrase about laying shingles stretches across a line break—“Taking great care that each is directly between two others”—so that the reader, like the carpenter, must pause to align the parts. Even the song-like interruption “That is the life! / Heigh-ho!” functions as a work chant, not a decorative flourish. The exclamation releases the poem’s accumulated energy, as if the speaker has just straightened up from the workbench. There is no heavy rhyme scheme, but internal echoes such as “sweet-smelling sawdust” and the list of woods give the language a tactile rhythm.

What makes “Trades” significant is the turn in its last line: “It is much easier than to write this poem.” The speaker envies the carpenter’s tangible task, yet the poem itself is carefully planed and fitted, image by image. Lowell suggests that writing is a trade too, but one whose materials are invisible and whose finish is far less certain. The longing for wood, sweat, and sawdust is also a longing for work that ends in a roof, a straight line, or a neat row of shingles. By making the poem sound so easy while confessing the difficulty of writing it, Lowell turns the poet’s envy into a craft of its own—and lets readers feel both the pleasure of manual work and the hidden labor of art.

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