Shipmate Sorrow — Poem analysis

I WAS shipmate with Sorrow in a day gone by; We shared wheel and look-out, old Sorrow and I; Good times and bad times, foul weather and fair, The old grey face of him was always there. There was never chanty raised there, never song I heard. But his voice would be in it like a crying bird ; I was dull in the dog watches, when the laugh went free. Because of old Sorrow sitting down by me. I thought I could lose him in the stir and change Of bright, wicked cities, all sunlit and strange ; There came a hand at my elbow and a voice in my ear — It was old patient Sorrow saying: "Lad, I'm here!" And by the bustling harbour, up the busy street. Many a time I see him, many a time I meet The old grey face there of one I used to know — And it's old shipmate Sorrow out of long ago.

And the watch at the halliards they may sing with a will, But the voice I used to hear — oh, I sometimes hear it still. Like a wind in a shroud piping, or a seabird's cry — And it's old Sorrow singing out of times gone by!

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Cicely Fox Smith, an English poet who published under her initials, made her name writing about sailors, ships, and the working life of the sea. She wrote in the early decades of the twentieth century, when the old age of sail was slipping out of living memory and maritime loss was still a raw, ordinary grief. Her poems often preserve the voices of ordinary seafarers, so choosing Sorrow as an old shipmate feels both natural and specific. "Shipmate Sorrow" grows from that world. Instead of presenting sorrow as an emotion that comes and goes, the poem turns it into a shipmate—an old, grey-faced sailor who shares the watch, sits through the dog watches, and follows the speaker even into crowded city streets.

The central idea is quietly powerful: grief is not an occasional passenger but a permanent member of the crew. The speaker recalls that he "was shipmate with Sorrow in a day gone by" and that they "shared wheel and look-out." Sorrow is there in foul weather and fair, in good times and bad. Even when laughter runs free, the voice of Sorrow cuts through it "like a crying bird." The speaker tries to shake him off in "bright, wicked cities, all sunlit and strange," but the escape fails: a hand at his elbow and a voice in his ear announce, "Lad, I'm here!" That patient intimacy is central. Sorrow is not an enemy attacking from outside; he is an old companion who knows the speaker's rhythms and keeps his place.

The poem's construction reinforces that idea. The lines roll with a long, chanty-like rhythm, built from the speech of sailors: wheel, look-out, dog watches, chanty, halliards, shroud. Rhyming couplets and half-rhymes give the verse a song-like movement while keeping it slightly off-balance, as if the music itself is shadowed. The rhymes often chime rather than lock perfectly—by and I, heard and bird, free and me—which suits a grief that never quite resolves. The dog watches—the short, often lonely periods of duty in the late afternoon and evening—become dull not because of idleness but because Sorrow sits down beside the speaker. The repeated image of the "old grey face" does the main symbolic work. Grey suggests age, weariness, and bad weather light; it also strips away the glamour of grief. Against the "sunlit and strange" cities, that grey face remains unchanging. In the last stanza the voice of Sorrow is no longer just a memory but a sound in the present: "like a wind in a shroud piping, or a seabird's cry." The word "shroud" works doubly—it is a ship's rope and a burial cloth, so the sound of grief is tied to both the rigging and the grave.

What makes the poem significant is its refusal to offer comfort by forgetting. The watch at the halliards may sing with a will, yet the speaker still hears the old voice beneath the present singing. Sorrow has become part of the sea's soundscape, as familiar as wind and birds. For a school audience, the poem is a vivid lesson in how personification can make an abstract feeling tangible. Fox Smith does not say "I was sad." She gives sadness a face, a voice, and a place on deck. The result is a small maritime elegy that understands grief as a companion who never goes ashore.

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