Elsa Wertman — Poem analysis

I was a peasant girl from Germany, Blue-eyed, rosy, happy and strong. And the first place I worked was at Thomas Greene’s. On a summer’s day when she was away He stole into the kitchen and took me Right in his arms and kissed me on my throat, I turning my head. Then neither of us Seemed to know what happened. And I cried for what would become of me. And cried and cried as my secret began to show. One day Mrs. Greene said she understood, And would make no trouble for me, And, being childless, would adopt it. (He had given her a farm to be still.) So she hid in the house and sent out rumors, As if it were going to happen to her. And all went well and the child was born— They were so kind to me. Later I married Gus Wertman, and years passed. But—at political rallies when sitters-by thought I was crying At the eloquence of Hamilton Greene— That was not it. No! I wanted to say: That’s my son! That’s my son.

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Edgar Lee Masters published *Spoon River Anthology* in 1915, a collection of free-verse epitaphs spoken by the dead of a fictional Illinois town. Masters grew up in rural Illinois and later worked as a Chicago lawyer, and his poems puncture the respectable surface of small-town life. In “Elsa Wertman,” a German immigrant woman speaks from the grave about a secret that shaped her life. At a time when American poetry still favored rhymed stanzas and elevated subjects, Masters used plain, unrhymed speech to let ordinary people reveal what decency preferred to bury.

The poem recounts how Elsa, “blue-eyed, rosy, happy and strong,” went to work at Thomas Greene’s. On a summer day while his wife was away, Greene “stole into the kitchen and took me / Right in his arms and kissed me on my throat.” The verbs carry unease: she turns her head, and “neither of us / Seemed to know what happened.” Pregnancy follows, and she “cried and cried as my secret began to show.” Mrs. Greene, childless, says she will adopt the baby—her husband has given her a farm to keep quiet—and she hides inside while spreading rumors that the pregnancy is her own. Elsa later marries Gus Wertman, but years later, at political rallies, bystanders think she is crying at the eloquence of Hamilton Greene. Her real unspoken cry is different: “That’s my son.”

The central idea is the cost of enforced silence. Elsa is not allowed to name her child publicly. The Greenes rewrite the birth as their own respectable story, and Elsa is managed with a show of kindness that is also a transaction. Her grief resurfaces only in moments that the public misreads. The poem exposes how social power—gender, class, and money—can erase a mother’s claim.

Masters constructs the poem as unrhymed free verse with irregular line lengths, so it sounds like halting confession rather than polished song. There is no meter to smooth over pain. The imagery moves from the brightness of Elsa’s youth to the hidden pregnancy; her body becomes evidence she cannot control. Key words sharpen the poem’s judgment: Greene “stole” in and “took” her, the unborn child is called “it,” and Mrs. Greene sends out “rumors” to build a false public story. Even the phrase “They were so kind to me” is shadowed by the farm given as hush money, because kindness here is part of a bargain.

The final image is the poem’s sharpest reversal. At the political rally, the crowd sees a woman moved by a politician’s eloquence, but her tears are for the lost child standing before them. The repetition of “That’s my son!” is a wish, not an utterance: she says “I wanted to say,” not “I said.” Even among the Spoon River dead, who finally tell the truths their town buried, Elsa’s claim remains locked inside her. That distinction gives the poem its lasting force—it speaks for a woman whose public life was a lie while still honoring the silence that outlived her.

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