The Complaints IX — Summary

Edward ShanksContemplative

When in the mines of dark and silent thought Sometimes I delve and find strange fancies there, With heavy labour to the surface brought That lie and mock me in the brighter air, Poor ores from starved lodes of poverty, Unfit for working or to be refined, That in the darkness cheat the miner's eye, I turn away from that base cave, the mind. Yet had I but the power to crush the stone There are strange metals hid in flakes therein, Each flake a spark sole-hidden and alone, That only cunning toilsome chemists win. All this I know and yet my chemistry Fails and the pregnant treasures useless lie.

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The speaker imagines digging through his own mind like a miner working a dark tunnel. The strange fancies he brings to the surface look promising underground, but in the clear light of day they seem poor, useless, even mocking. He turns away from the mind, calling it a base cave. Yet he also knows that inside those unpromising stones there are rare metals—tiny hidden sparks—that only a skilled, painstaking chemist could extract. The problem is that his own chemistry is not good enough, so the “pregnant treasures” remain locked in worthless ore. The mood is one of quiet frustration and self-doubt: the feeling of sensing real value inside yourself but lacking the craft to bring it out, leaving potential wasted.

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