Silver Filigree — Poem analysis

Elinor WylieDrømmende

The icicles wreathing On trees in festoon Swing, swayed to our breathing: They're made of the moon.

She's a pale, waxen taper; And these seem to drip Transparent as paper From the flame of her tip.

Molten, smoking a little, Into crystal they pass; Falling, freezing, to brittle And delicate glass.

Each a sharp-pointed flower, Each a brief stalactite Which hangs for an hour In the blue cave of night.

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Elinor Wylie, an American poet known in the 1920s for polished, musical lyrics, published “Silver Filigree” in her first collection, *Nets to Catch the Wind* (1921). She wrote during a period when many poets were abandoning rhyme and meter, yet Wylie built small, intricate poems that feel closer to carved ivory or silverwork than to free-verse experiments. That context matters because “Silver Filigree” is itself a piece of verbal craftsmanship: it takes an ordinary winter scene—icicles hanging from trees—and casts it as the moon’s handiwork.

The poem’s central idea is transformation. The moon becomes “a pale, waxen taper,” a candle whose dripping wax falls through the cold air and hardens into icicles. Those icicles, in turn, are imagined as “crystal,” “brittle / And delicate glass.” Wylie layers one substance over another—moonlight into wax, wax into water, water into glass—so the night seems to be a workshop where light is turned into fragile art. But the beauty she describes is inseparable from its brevity: each shape hangs “for an hour / In the blue cave of night.” The poem suggests that the loveliest things are not monuments but brief, sharp, translucent forms that exist only under certain conditions.

The construction of “Silver Filigree” reinforces that idea. Four quatrains move with a light, chiming ABAB rhyme: “wreathing” answers “breathing,” “festoon” answers “moon,” and later “taper” meets “paper,” “brittle” meets “little.” The lines are short, usually five or six syllables, so the poem feels compact, as if it might snap like the ice it describes. The rhythm has a swinging quality, especially in the opening lines—“The icicles wreathing / On trees in festoon / Swing, swayed to our breathing”—where the extra unstressed syllables make the lines rock gently. Wylie even places “swing, swayed” at the start of line three, so the language performs the motion it describes. That subtle swaying suggests the icicles are not dead objects; they respond to human presence, as if our breath or attention gives them life.

Wylie’s imagery works through a chain of linked metaphors. The moon is a candle, and the icicles are its wax, “Molten, smoking a little,” then falling and freezing into glass. This is an odd, almost impossible image: molten wax is hot, yet it passes directly into cold crystal. The paradox matters because it captures the way winter can make heat and cold feel strangely alike—a drip that freezes mid-fall. The simile “Transparent as paper” is also surprising. Paper is not usually transparent, but tracing paper and waxed paper are, and the phrase suggests thinness and translucency rather than perfect clarity. An icicle is like a page that light can pass through, a fragile written thing. The final stanza shifts the metaphor again: each icicle becomes “a sharp-pointed flower” and “a brief stalactite.” The flower gives the ice an organic, blooming quality, while the stalactite places it inside a cave—the “blue cave of night.” These two images pull in opposite directions: flowers bloom quickly and die, while stalactites form over centuries. By calling each stalactite “brief,” Wylie collapses geological time into a single hour, making the ordinary winter night feel both ancient and momentary.

The sound of the poem is as delicate as its images. Sibilant and liquid consonants—“swing, swayed,” “silver,” “waxen,” “crystal,” “glass”—whisper through the lines, mimicking cold air and dripping water. The phrase “Falling, freezing, to brittle” uses alliteration and a string of short *i* sounds to enact the sudden hardening of liquid into solid. The title itself, “Silver Filigree,” names an art of fine metal threads twisted into lace-like patterns. By applying that term to icicles, Wylie asks readers to see nature as a silversmith and the winter landscape as a piece of jewelry.

The significance of the poem lies in that fusion of natural observation and crafted form. In just four stanzas, Wylie turns a common sight into a small myth: the moon as candlemaker, the night as a blue cave, the icicle as a work of art that lasts only an hour. The poem does not try to be grand or philosophical. Instead, it offers a moment of precise, shimmering perception, and its tight rhyme and imagery make that moment feel both inevitable and fragile. For student readers, “Silver Filigree” is a reminder that short formal poems can carry large imaginative energy—that a few crafted lines can, like the icicle, catch light for a little while before they melt.

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