In the Night — Poem analysis

The light was burning very dim, The little blaze was brown and red, And I waked just in time to see A panther going under the bed.

I saw him crowd his body down To make it fit the little space. I saw the streaks along his back, And bloody bubbles on his face.

Long marks of light came out of my eyes And went into the lamp--and there Was Something waiting in the room-- I saw it sitting on a chair.

Its only eye was shining red, Its face was very long and gray, Its two bent teeth were sticking out, And all its jaw was torn away.

Its legs were flat against the chair, Its arms were hanging like a swing. It made its eye look into me, But did not move or say a thing.

I tried to call and tried to scream, But all my throat was shut and dry. My little heart was jumping fast, I couldn't talk or cry.

And when I'd look outside the bed I'd see the panther going in. The streaks were moving on his back, The bubbles on his chin.

I couldn't help it if they came, I couldn't save myself at all, And so I only waited there And turned my face against the wall.

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A dim lamp, a child suddenly awake, and a panther sliding beneath the bed: Elizabeth Madox Roberts opens “In the Night” inside a moment of pure childhood terror. Roberts, a Kentucky-born writer who published the poem in her 1922 collection *Under the Tree*, spent much of her career exploring rural Southern life and the inner dramas of ordinary people. Here she narrows her focus to a single bedroom, where a half-lit lamp turns the familiar into something predatory. The poem is not merely a ghost story; it is a study of how fear isolates a child and how the mind, caught between sleep and waking, can make terror visible.

The action is simple and almost unbearable. A speaker young enough to call a racing pulse “my little heart” wakes “just in time to see / A panther going under the bed.” The panther must “crowd his body down / To make it fit the little space,” yet it has room to display “streaks along his back, / And bloody bubbles on his face.” Then the child’s gaze shifts to a chair, where “Something waiting” sits: a gray-faced creature with one shining red eye, two bent teeth, and a torn-away jaw. It does not attack or speak; it simply “made its eye look into me.” That silent looking is the poem’s real threat. The child cannot scream or call because the throat is “shut and dry,” and the heart jumps uselessly. In the end, the speaker surrenders: “I couldn’t save myself at all, / And so I only waited there / And turned my face against the wall.”

Roberts builds this nightmare in a deceptively tidy form. Six quatrains follow an uncomplicated rhyme pattern, with the second and fourth lines chiming—red with bed, space with face—and the meter stays close to a steady, song-like iambic rhythm. That nursery cadence matters because it sounds like a child’s own voice, counting out fear in neat lines even as the content slips into hallucination. The plain words—“little,” “dim,” “brown and red”—belong to a child’s vocabulary, yet Roberts uses them to create an atmosphere of smothered dread. The repeated “I saw” marks the speaker as a witness, not an actor; the child can see everything and control nothing.

The imagery turns on eyes and light. The lamp’s “little blaze” is “brown and red,” and later the intruder’s “only eye was shining red,” as if the room’s glow has concentrated into a watching presence. In the strangest reversal, “long marks of light came out of my eyes / And went into the lamp,” suggesting that the child is not seeing reality but projecting terror outward. The panther’s “bloody bubbles” reappear on its chin, small variations that make the creature feel persistently, physically present. Even the creature on the chair is described in terms of broken ordinariness: legs “flat against the chair,” arms “hanging like a swing.” The swing simile is especially unsettling because it attaches a playground image to a monstrous body.

What makes “In the Night” significant is its refusal to explain the terror away. Roberts does not wake the child into a safe morning or reveal the monsters as shadows. She stays inside the fear, where waiting and looking are the only possible responses. The poem treats a child’s private nighttime dread as real and worthy of serious art, and it captures, with uncommon precision, the paralysis that comes when fear cannot be spoken. The final image—face turned to the wall—is not comfort but resignation, a last attempt to shut out what cannot be fought. In that gesture, Roberts shows how deeply the mind can be trapped by what it has itself created.

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