The Hens — Poem analysis

The night was coming very fast; It reached the gate as I ran past.

The pigeons had gone to the tower of the church And all the hens were on their perch,

Up in the barn, and I thought I heard A piece of a little purring word.

I stopped inside, waiting and staying, To try to hear what the hens were saying.

They were asking something, that was plain, Asking it over and over again.

One of them moved and turned around, Her feathers made a ruffled sound,

A ruffled sound, like a bushful of birds, And she said her little asking words.

She pushed her head close into her wing, But nothing answered anything.

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Elizabeth Madox Roberts grew up in the Kentucky countryside, and her 1922 collection *Under the Tree* gathers brief poems that look at farm life through a child’s eyes. Written during an era when American regionalist writers were preserving rural voices and landscapes, “The Hens” captures a familiar evening on a farm: night arrives quickly, pigeons have gone to the church tower, and a child running past the gate stops inside the barn to listen. The poem’s central encounter is not dramatic; it is the almost accidental hearing of hens making soft, repetitive sounds that seem to mean something. In that pause, Roberts transforms an ordinary barnyard noise into a meditation on the limits of understanding between humans and animals.

The poem moves in mostly rhyming couplets, with a loose conversational meter that keeps the scene from feeling too neat. Pairs like *gate/past* and *perch/church* create a simple musical structure, but lines sometimes stretch beyond strict rhythm, as in “The pigeons had gone to the tower of the church,” which sounds like a child explaining what happened. The repetition of *asking* is the poem’s most important structural choice. The speaker says the hens “were asking something, that was plain, / Asking it over and over again,” and the doubled word imitates exactly the patient, insistent clucking it describes. The sound of *staying* and *saying* in the next couplet also links the child’s patient act with the hens’ speech-like noises, as if both are part of the same listening moment.

Roberts’s imagery stays close to the senses of sound and touch. The child hears “a piece of a little purring word,” a phrase that hovers strangely between animal comfort and human language. A purr is not a word, and a “piece” of a word is even smaller, so the poem suggests that the hens possess something language-like but incomplete. When one hen moves, her feathers make “a ruffled sound, like a bushful of birds,” a simile that multiplies the soft noise outward, turning one body into a whole hidden crowd. The key word *asking* appears again and again, and the poem treats it as both plain and mysterious. The speaker understands that a question is being repeated but cannot identify what is being sought. The word *little* in “little asking words” keeps the hens domestic and small, yet their repeated question becomes almost ritual.

The final image is quietly powerful. One hen pushes “her head close into her wing,” settling into her own body, “but nothing answered anything.” The line is deliberately flat and absolute. No human word, no divine sign, no second hen responds. That lack of answer might seem bleak, but the poem does not treat it as failure. Instead, it suggests that the child’s attention is the right response: listening, waiting, staying. The repeated present participles—*coming, waiting, staying, asking*—give the whole poem a suspended, ongoing quality, as if this moment of unanswered asking still hangs in the barn air.

What makes “The Hens” significant is its refusal to turn rural childhood into mere nostalgia or to force the hens into a neat moral. It takes a child’s curiosity seriously and respects the silence that follows. The poem belongs to the tradition of regional writing that values small, specific places, but its subject—the desire to understand another creature’s inner life—makes it feel immediate. A school reader may recognize the same urge to listen for words in the sounds animals make. Roberts suggests that not everything in the natural world can be translated, and that some of its most compelling speech is a question with no answer.

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