The Room Upstairs — Summary

Hazel HallContemplative

Room just above me Over my own, I have not seen you, I have not known Where your big bed stands, Where is your chair, Whether your windows Look here or look there.

Room just above me. Long have I kept Vigil below you While others slept, Thinking of footsteps Known to your floor. Which passed from your threshold To come there no more.

Room just above me, To-night it seems There is new creaking Over your beams; It might be the night-wind, It might be the tread Of one who is lonely, Or bored, being dead.

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Hazel Hall’s speaker is lying awake in a room directly beneath another room they have never seen. They imagine its furniture, its windows, its bed, but what really holds their attention is sound. For many nights they have kept watch while others slept, listening to footsteps that used to cross the upstairs floor but no longer come. There is a quiet grief in that attention, as if the speaker is waiting for someone who has vanished or died. Tonight the boards creak again with a new sound. It might be only wind, but the speaker imagines something else: a lonely, bored ghost still moving above. The mood is hushed, intimate, and eerie—an ordinary ceiling becomes a thin border between the living and whatever might remain.

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