Oblivion — Poem analysis

Jessie FausetEftertænksom

From the French of Massillon Coicou (Haiti)

I hope when I am dead that I shall lie In some deserted grave--I cannot tell you why, But I should like to sleep in some neglected spot Unknown to every one, by every one forgot.

There lying I should taste with my dead breath The utter lack of life, the fullest sense of death; And I should never hear the note of jealousy or hate, The tribute paid by passersby to tombs of state.

To me would never penetrate the prayers and tears That futilely bring torture to dead and dying ears; There I should lie annihilate and my dead heart would bless Oblivion--the shroud and envelope of happiness.

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Jessie Redmon Fauset, known as a guiding editor of the Harlem Renaissance, also translated poems that linked African American and Caribbean literary traditions. Her version of “Oblivion” carries forward the voice of Massillon Coicou, a Haitian poet, playwright, and diplomat executed in 1908 during political turmoil. That context matters because the poem treats public honor not as a comfort but as a hazard. Written in an era when Black writers often felt pressure to be visible and exemplary, Fauset’s translation offers a quiet countercurrent: a longing to be entirely unknown.

The speaker’s wish arrives plain and strange at once: “I hope when I am dead that I shall lie / In some deserted grave—I cannot tell you why.” The dash after “grave” creates an intimate hesitation, as if the speaker cannot fully justify the longing or expects the reader to find it odd. The poem unfolds in three rhymed quatrains built from couplets, yet the lines stretch loosely beyond strict iambic pentameter, giving the verse a musing, almost sighing movement. Rhymes like “lie” and “why,” “spot” and “forgot” feel simple and final, like a door closing quietly.

The imagery turns death from a feared blank into a place of relief. The speaker imagines a “neglected spot / Unknown to every one, by every one forgot” and says that there, with “dead breath,” he would taste “The utter lack of life, the fullest sense of death.” The paradox is deliberate: the fullest sensation belongs not to living but to annihilation. What the speaker wants to escape becomes clearer in the middle stanza. He would never hear “the note of jealousy or hate” or “the tribute paid by passersby to tombs of state.” Those tributes are exposed as empty performances, offered to monuments of power rather than to people. Even prayers and tears are called futile tortures that would penetrate the ears of the dead if they could. The grave chosen here is not a shrine; it is a retreat from other people’s emotions and agendas.

The final couplet gathers these ideas into a striking image: the speaker lies “annihilate” and blesses “Oblivion—the shroud and envelope of happiness.” A shroud covers a corpse, and an envelope encloses something held apart. By pairing them, the poem makes oblivion both a covering and a container, something that protects as it erases. The near-rhyme of “bless” and “happiness” refuses neat closure, as if the sound itself is fading into the quiet the speaker desires. This inversion of the usual elegiac hope—that the dead be remembered—gives the poem its force. It does not grieve obscurity; it celebrates forgetting as the only state beyond envy, rivalry, and false public feeling.

Fauset’s act of translation also places this Haitian meditation within African American literature during the Harlem Renaissance, a movement often associated with building a proud, lasting record. “Oblivion” suggests that forgetting may be a form of freedom, especially for those whose public lives have been shaped by violence, performance, or the burden of representation. Its significance lies in that challenge: it asks why remembrance is so often assumed to be a gift, and it imagines happiness as something that may require disappearing entirely.

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