The Black Monkey — Poem analysis

My Babbles has a nasty knack Of keeping monkeys on her back. A great big black one comes and swings Right on her sash or pinny strings. It is a horrid thing and wild And makes her such a naughty child.

She comes and stands beside my chair With almost an offended air And says:--“Oh, Father, why can’t I?” And stamps her foot and starts to cry-- I look at Mother in dismay ... What little girl is this, to-day?

She throws about her nicest toys And makes a truly dreadful noise Till Mother rises from her place With quite a Sunday churchy face And Babbles silently is led Into the dark and her own bed.

Never a kiss or one Goodnight, Never a glimpse of candle light. Oh, how the monkey simply flies! Oh, how poor Babbles calls and cries, Runs from the room with might and main, “Father dear, I am good again.”

When she is sitting on my knee Snuggled quite close and kissing me, Babbles and I, we think the same-- Why, that the monkey never came Only a terrible dream maybe ... What did she have for evening tea?

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Katherine Mansfield, the New Zealand-born writer whose short stories helped make literary modernism feel intimate and psychologically sharp, often wrote about children not as ornaments but as turbulent little egos. “The Black Monkey” belongs to that side of her work. Written in the early twentieth century, at a time when middle-class child-rearing often valued obedience and quietness, the poem stages a familiar crisis: a daughter called Babbles has a tantrum, and her parents must decide what the outburst means.

The poem is built from six-line stanzas of rhyming couplets, mostly in a skipping iambic tetrameter. The form is deliberately close to a nursery rhyme. “My Babbles has a nasty knack / Of keeping monkeys on her back.” That bouncy rhythm sets up a curious tension, because the subject is a “horrid thing and wild” and a child being shamed as “naughty.” The rhyme makes the anger feel almost game-like, yet the poem does not mock Babbles. Instead, the couplets imitate the relentless energy of a small child’s will, especially in lines like “She throws about her nicest toys / And makes a truly dreadful noise.” The concrete detail of the monkey swinging on “her sash or pinny strings” gives the child’s inner chaos a visible shape; it hangs off the everyday clothes of the nursery.

Mansfield’s word choices sharpen the family dynamics. The father, who narrates, seems sympathetic but uncertain: “I look at Mother in dismay ... / What little girl is this, to-day?” The mother responds with ritualized disapproval, rising “with quite a Sunday churchy face.” That phrase turns her sternness into something performed, almost religious in its coldness. The punishment is not physical but emotional: Babbles is led “Into the dark and her own bed.” The next stanza repeats “Never” with an almost Gothic heaviness—“Never a kiss or one Goodnight, / Never a glimpse of candle light.” The child’s cry, “Father dear, I am good again,” reveals how quickly she learns to say what will end her isolation. Then the monkey “simply flies,” and the tantrum dissolves as suddenly as it arrived.

The ending is where the poem becomes most interesting. Sitting on her father’s knee, “snuggled quite close and kissing me,” Babbles and the speaker silently agree “that the monkey never came / Only a terrible dream maybe ...” The ellipsis is important; it leaves a pause before the final, deflating question: “What did she have for evening tea?” That question is both comic and tender. It suggests the father half-wants a physical explanation—indigestion, tiredness, too much excitement—rather than a moral one. The black monkey, then, is not just a symbol of bad behavior. It is an alibi that lets both parent and child separate the loved little girl from the wild force that temporarily possesses her.

What makes “The Black Monkey” significant is its refusal to turn a tantrum into a simple lesson. Mansfield does not say the child is wicked, nor does she say the parents are cruel. She records the small tragedy of punishment, the child’s frantic performance of goodness, and the parent’s uneasy desire to believe it was all “a terrible dream.” In an era that often demanded children be seen and not heard, Mansfield listens to Babbles—and to the quiet complicity between father and daughter after the storm.

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