Tanka III — Summary

Drink in moods of joy! Why should the sky be lonely? Neither sun nor moon-- How my heart is shy of night Like Autumn’s leaf brown pendants.

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The speaker begins with a gentle command to take in joy while it is available. Then the sky becomes a kind of companion—lonely, empty, with neither sun nor moon to light it. That missing light leaves the speaker caught in a hushed, twilit in-between, and the heart grows “shy of night.” Night here feels less like simple darkness and more like something to shrink from. The closing image of autumn’s brown leaf pendants adds to that mood: dry, fragile, barely hanging on. Altogether, the poem creates a bittersweet, quiet atmosphere, mixing a wish for happiness with loneliness and a soft dread of what darkness might bring. It reads like someone trying to steady himself against sadness while the light slips away.

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