Tanka VIII — Poem analysis

Lewis AlexanderContemplativo

Could I hear your voice O but this silence is sweet Words mar all beauty. Turn then into your own heart And pluck the roots from the soil--

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Lewis Alexander, a poet and playwright associated with the Harlem Renaissance, wrote in a period when African American artists were claiming new voices in American culture. Yet Alexander often chose an old Japanese form, the tanka, with its five lines and fixed syllable count of 5-7-5-7-7. “Tanka VIII” belongs to this quiet, compressed tradition. The form itself enacts the poem’s argument: small, balanced, and exact enough to suggest that beauty might live in restraint rather than in more speech.

The opening line, “Could I hear your voice,” speaks of longing. It is addressed to someone whose sound the speaker wishes to receive. The second line shifts with the exclamation “O but this silence is sweet.” The word “but” turns against the first line, and the “O” makes the realization feel sudden and heartfelt. By the third line, the speaker has moved from longing to a general truth: “Words mar all beauty.” This statement is decisive. It identifies language as a threat to the very thing the speaker seemed to want. To hear a voice might satisfy desire, but it would also break the sweetness of silence. The poem does not deny the wish; it simply chooses silence as the more beautiful condition.

That choice becomes active in the poem’s turn. In a tanka, the third line often acts as a hinge, and here “Words mar all beauty” pivots the poem from observation to instruction. The speaker says, “Turn then into your own heart.” The word “then” follows logically from the previous line: if words are dangerous, the only safe direction is inward. The heart becomes a landscape, and the final line extends that metaphor: “And pluck the roots from the soil--.” The image is earthy and physical. Roots are normally hidden, essential, connected to growth. To pluck them is to expose or remove something that has been quietly feeding the heart. The dash at the end leaves the action unfinished, as if the work of self-examination has no neat conclusion. The poem does not say what the roots are—perhaps old desires, unspoken fears, or sources of beauty—but it insists that they must be handled.

Alexander’s use of the tanka matters because it joins a Black American voice to a Japanese poetic tradition, showing the Harlem Renaissance’s cosmopolitan reach. Instead of the ringing public rhetoric often associated with the movement, Alexander offers a private, almost whispered speech. The lack of rhyme and the strict syllable count create a rhythmic shape that feels both formal and breath-like. The poem’s key auditory words—voice, silence, words—are countered by its concluding organic words—heart, roots, soil. That movement from sound to earth suggests a turn away from public expression toward something deeper and more personal.

The significance of “Tanka VIII” lies in this fusion of form and idea. It uses the shortest of lyric structures to argue that silence is not empty but full of sweetness and hidden roots. In an era when many writers were speaking loudly about identity and freedom, Lewis Alexander demonstrated that a whisper, carefully shaped, could carry its own power. The poem invites readers to stop reaching for the voice of another and to tend the soil inside themselves.

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