Tanka VIII — Summary

Lewis AlexanderContemplative

Could I hear your voice O but this silence is sweet Words mar all beauty. Turn then into your own heart And pluck the roots from the soil--

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In this five-line tanka, the speaker nearly wishes they could hear the beloved’s voice, then catches themselves. The quiet between them feels too sweet to break, and words, the speaker says, only mar beauty. What comes across is a mood of intimate restraint: there is longing here, but also a protective instinct, as if naming the feeling would cheapen it. The last lines turn away from conversation entirely. Instead of asking the other person to speak, the speaker urges a turn inward—into the heart—to pull up what has taken root there. The image is earthy and a little painful, like weeding out buried emotions. The dash at the end leaves the thought unfinished, so the poem itself seems to trail off into the same silence it defends.

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