Advice to Maple-Trees — Poem analysis

Maxwell BodenheimContemplative

O little maple-trees, Slender and unkempt, looking with shaggy askance Upon the moon-spiked solitude; O little maple-trees, Growing a little toward the sky That touches you to all eyes save your own, You rattle insistently for wings, But wings could never tear The stain of earth from your feet: The earth that gnaws at you until Your wing-cries strike the autumn night. You see, with me, this crescent moon Juggled on the tawny fingertip Of a running cloud. The touch of your desire, or its fall, Would but be symbols of an equal death.

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Maxwell Bodenheim (1892–1954), a colorful figure in the Chicago literary renaissance and later in 1920s Greenwich Village bohemia, wrote “Advice to Maple-Trees” in an era when American poetry was breaking away from strict rhyme and meter toward free verse, conversational speech, and sharp, imagistic detail. Bodenheim’s poems often combine a delicate lyrical surface with a bleak, ironic view of human longing, and this one is a compact example. The title itself is gently strange: what genuine advice can anyone offer a tree?

The speaker addresses young maple-trees as if they were restless, half-formed beings—“slender and unkempt,” glancing with “shaggy askance” at the moonlit loneliness around them. They are not at peace; they “rattle insistently for wings.” Yet the poem’s central advice is harsh: wings would not free them, because “wings could never tear / The stain of earth from your feet.” The earth here is not passive soil but an active, gnawing force that works on the trees until their “wing-cries strike the autumn night.” The desire to escape is real, but rootedness cannot be undone. The speaker then shares a fleeting vision with the trees—a crescent moon “juggled on the tawny fingertip / Of a running cloud”—only to deflate it with the closing thought that both the achievement of desire and its failure are “symbols of an equal death.” The poem’s core idea is not that longing should be silenced, but that it cannot alter the shared fate of rooted and human things.

Bodenheim constructs the poem without regular rhyme or meter, relying instead on repetition and direct address. The repeated “O little maple-trees” builds an incantatory rhythm, as if the speaker is half-praying to the trees and half-scolding them. Sound textures carry much of the meaning: the sibilance of “slender and unkempt,” the rough consonants of “shaggy askance,” and the metallic edge of “moon-spiked solitude” create an atmosphere that feels both tender and uneasy. Lines such as “The touch of your desire, or its fall” are balanced so carefully that the final phrase, “an equal death,” lands with quiet finality rather than melodrama.

The imagery is simultaneously physical and symbolic. The “stain of earth” suggests a mark that cannot be washed away, an original condition rather than a temporary accident. The compound “wing-cries” fuses the dream of flight with pain, and the verb “gnaws” turns the ground into something hungry, patient, and possessive. Against that weight, the crescent moon resting on the “tawny fingertip” of a cloud is delicate, fleeting, and strangely intimate—a brief performance of lightness. The final word “symbols” matters greatly: the speaker steps back from the trees and treats their longing as an abstraction, yet one with bodily consequences.

What makes “Advice to Maple-Trees” significant is its refusal to offer comfort. Much nature poetry of its time looked to trees for wisdom or transcendence; Bodenheim looks at them and finds a mirror of human restlessness. The poem is not really about maples at all. It is a cold, tender invitation to see that the dream of escaping one’s own nature—through ambition, love, or flight—may be as mortal as staying rooted. In fewer than twenty lines, Bodenheim turns a stand of young trees into a small, unsentimental drama about desire, limitation, and the equal death waiting under every upward reach.

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