Friendship — Summary

Maxwell BodenheimContemplative

Grey, drooping-shouldered bushes scrape the edges Of bending swirls of yellow-white flowers. So do my thoughts meet the wind-scattered color of you. A green-shadowed trance of water Is splintered to little, white tasseled awakenings By the beat of long, black oars. So do my thoughts enter yours. Split, brown-blue clouds press into each other Over hills dressed in mute, clinging haze. So do my thoughts slowly form Over the draped mystery of you.

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Bodenheim turns friendship into a series of slow natural events. In each stanza, the speaker watches a landscape—bushes catching flowers, oars breaking still water, clouds meeting over hazy hills—and then says, in effect, “that is how my thoughts reach you.” The friend appears as scattered color, as water stirred into wakefulness, as a draped mystery. The speaker’s thoughts do not demand; they brush against, enter, and gather around the other person the way weather touches a scene.

The mood is hushed, dreamy, and faintly melancholy. Words like “grey,” “drooping,” “mute,” and “clinging haze” give it a soft weight, while “yellow-white flowers” and “little, white tasseled awakenings” keep it from feeling bleak. Friendship here feels like quiet attention—a wish to be near someone’s inner life without forcing it open.

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