Rear Porches of an Apartment Building — Summary

A sky that has never known sun, moon, or stars, A sky that is like a dead, kind face Would have the color of your eyes, O servant-girl singing of pear-trees in the sun And scraping the yellow fruit you once picked When your lavender-white eyes were alive. On the porch above you sit two women With faces the color of dry brown earth; They knit grey rosettes and nibble cakes. And on the porch above them are three children Gravely kissing each other’s foreheads, And an ample nurse with a huge red fan.... The death of the afternoon to them Is but the lengthening of blue-black shadows on brick walls.

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On the lower rear porch of an apartment building, a servant-girl sings of pear-trees and scrapes yellow fruit. The speaker imagines her eyes as a sky that has never known sun, moon, or stars—a dead, kind face drained of light. Her song seems to remember a time when her “lavender-white eyes were alive” and she picked the fruit herself.

Above her sit two women with faces the color of dry brown earth, knitting grey rosettes and nibbling cakes; above them, children gravely kiss each other’s foreheads while a nurse waves a huge red fan. Each group is separate, quiet, and strangely cut off from real feeling. By the end, the dying afternoon matters to them only as longer blue-black shadows on brick walls. The mood is melancholic and still, full of faded vitality and brick-bound twilight.

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